Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/10/25, 4:06 AM
This was such an amazing chapter and I loved reading it. You wove the main plots all happening at once together so well!
12/8/25, 7:49 PM
Another great chapter

12/10/25, 1:41 AM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) Thanks!
12/10/25, 1:41 AM
If you ever decide to write more, I'd love a chapter of turning the tables, giving some justice to Alan, freeing him again (and a payback for Oscar, though I can understand why he'd want to escape this fate). Then again, I'm a sucker for good endings, so that's just me
Anonymous
12/10/25, 12:31 AM
This has been one of my favourite reads on here. I’m very excited to see more! I really like your writing style and the complexity of emotions that he’s feeling, it’s honestly been eye opening and thank you for your candour around RSD struggles it gave me things to reflect on personally. The last few chapters truly had my heart strings in a knot was teary eyed for most of them, the end here has been a nice diversion from that. I’m very excited to see how you develop the story following this especially with the stalker and anonymous man being brought into the foreground a little more!
12/10/25, 12:03 AM
Another great fresh take on the concept. I hope that you explore this world more; there is lots of potential!
12/8/25, 1:34 PM
wow, brutal and unsparing and one spark of hope. I'm loving this.

12/8/25, 8:41 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10022083) One spark of hope is all he needs!

12/9/25, 9:51 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10022083) brutal indeed! Wow!
12/9/25, 8:54 PM
Oh yeah, yes please I would happily become pig pup. Any takers to transform me please
greg
12/9/25, 8:45 PM
i love this story i been searching for a man like the salesperson
Anonymous
12/9/25, 8:44 PM
beautiful story i would love to find guy like that at the department store
12/9/25, 8:32 PM
This is really hot its only been the beginning but i can tell this will be a favorite for a long time