Recent Comments

Benny
7/12/21, 7:18 AM
Lots of potential for a sequel.
7/12/21, 2:55 AM
The scene with the kid brothers reprogrammed to lust for their big brother and masturbating on the countertop was incredibly hot!
Anonymous
7/12/21, 2:40 AM
Fantastic second part! I can't to see what happens next!
Kods
7/11/21, 11:58 PM
This is hot can't wait for more! Though I am curious how this will play out Jared and Matt seemingly had a deep connection even before Matt's powers came. but now they can express it intimately. I know you said it's going to be okay so I have hope! Though admittedly I'd still feel a bit sad if Matt's answer was "Yeah we can have sex and I'll dominate you...but I don't love you and never will."

7/12/21, 1:06 AM
@Kods Thanks a lot! Oh yeah, they're gonna have a happy ending but they're gonna have to earn it.
Anonymous
7/11/21, 11:07 PM
So you blackmailed your teacher?

7/11/21, 11:14 PM
yes @

Anonymous
7/11/21, 11:41 PM
@Davidc I am a teacher myself so needless to say this doesn't sit well with me at all. Granted I don't know the back story of why you blackmailed your teacher but I guess if that gets your rock off...

7/11/21, 11:54 PM
sorry you feel that way.

Anonymous
7/12/21, 1:01 AM
@Davidc I'm not. I do believe in karma though. ;)
Swizzington
7/12/21, 12:43 AM
Glad you enjoyed it! I don't think I have read any of Mr. Sloane's works, but I do enjoy horror (to an extent). I will give it a look! Thanks!
jjjjjjjjj
7/12/21, 12:31 AM
I liked this a lot!
jjjjjjjjj
7/12/21, 12:28 AM
I liked the idea, but it scared me a little!
Anonymous
7/12/21, 12:22 AM
I love this!
nobody
7/11/21, 7:33 PM
The whole story was great but.... where exactly did the points factor in??

7/12/21, 12:21 AM
It determined who won. The winner had the ability to alter all cards played any way he likes. However, due to the Reality Warp cars, neither Grant (the winner) nor any of the others realized the game was magic. From their perspective, they played a boring game where they drew cards that roughly mirrored themselves but otherwise did nothing. So Grant changed nothing. @nobody