Recent Comments

7/12/21, 3:22 PM
I cant wait for the next chapter
7/12/21, 3:09 PM
Aww, I really wish the ending was more erotic. I would've loved a descriptive sex scene.
guardG
7/12/21, 2:45 PM
Please continue the story. I'd like to see more of what will happen to Forest.
7/12/21, 1:44 PM
Perfect stuff. I love conversion fucks and men becoming brothers.
7/12/21, 12:02 PM
The ending was shortened due to time restrains, right? Sad, it was rather nice despite feeling a lot like a previous entry.
Kevin Rammage
7/12/21, 8:15 AM
Oh my god! This is easily the best story in this contest! The escalation was spot on, the stakes felt solidly high, it was fucking hot as hell! I very much want to see more stories in this series. You knocked this one out of the park!
Benny
7/12/21, 7:18 AM
Lots of potential for a sequel.
7/12/21, 2:55 AM
The scene with the kid brothers reprogrammed to lust for their big brother and masturbating on the countertop was incredibly hot!
Anonymous
7/12/21, 2:40 AM
Fantastic second part! I can't to see what happens next!
Kods
7/11/21, 11:58 PM
This is hot can't wait for more! Though I am curious how this will play out Jared and Matt seemingly had a deep connection even before Matt's powers came. but now they can express it intimately. I know you said it's going to be okay so I have hope! Though admittedly I'd still feel a bit sad if Matt's answer was "Yeah we can have sex and I'll dominate you...but I don't love you and never will."

7/12/21, 1:06 AM
@Kods Thanks a lot! Oh yeah, they're gonna have a happy ending but they're gonna have to earn it.