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7/11/21, 5:13 AM
A nice stinky story. And I mean that in the best possible way.
7/11/21, 4:14 AM
Nicely written. A story that drew me in, the descriptions became very visual. Thankyou for this.
7/8/21, 7:27 AM
Hot story. How is is true, is it your experience, or you know the person it happened to?

7/10/21, 12:37 PM
@Jonanator hi, its a rue story that happened with me. it was a blackmail/ domination. i wrote the story the way it ahopened elsewhere and then i rhought what would happen if i turned it into a hypnosis story as i am intruiged by that. so i took out the blackmail and mist elements of domination/ the force side to get this.

7/10/21, 5:49 PM
well, it is a great story@Davidc

7/11/21, 1:57 AM
@Jonanator thanks for that. any feedback is much appreciated
7/11/21, 1:53 AM
Hot falls short. Excellent ending.
7/10/21, 8:53 PM
Great Story!
Anonymous
7/10/21, 8:50 PM
I liked it.
Anonymous
7/10/21, 8:24 PM
Fantastic conclusion! The whole series has been so well written that I’m gonna be sad to see it end, but at the same time it ends on such a great conclusion I don’t think I’d want it to continue
7/10/21, 6:01 PM
Where is the hypnosis?
7/10/21, 5:25 PM
Oh, I'd love to see more of Mr. Jabour!!!
7/10/21, 4:05 PM
que alegría ver que volviste con mas de esta historia :3 me encanto, la ame, y definitivamente quiero más 💙💙💙💙 Solo un comentario, deberias señalizar el cambio de protagonista... me tomo un tiempo darme.cuenta que ya no era la misma persona. Generalmente ponen algo.como "Jefe POV" (no recuerdo si alguna vez pusiste su nombre XD )