Recent Comments

11/23/25, 2:16 AM
All of these chapters are awesome but Parker and Andy remind me of the couple in my very favorite chapter, Sam and Jason. I love how brilliantly you write incredibly hot, sexy scenes but then also turn around and make them wholesome, sweet and kind hearted. Parker's reaction to seeing Andy broken really touched and surprised me. Thanks for making these characters feel real and three dimensional. I can't wait for the next chapter!
11/22/25, 11:37 PM
Wow, this is really hot! Your writing always nails the perfect balance of corruption and guilt that comes with dad-son incest. Looking forward to see this pair again!
11/22/25, 10:09 PM
Okay this chapter is half hot half wholesome. A supportive bicouple. Andy and Parker having a wholesome relationship instead of mindfucked relationship. What a packed chapter. Cant wait to see whats coming next (week, perhaps)
11/17/25, 10:57 PM
Hot story, but it's tough to root for rapists. I hope Drew and Travis get revenge.

11/21/25, 3:06 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I agree with you)

11/21/25, 4:18 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) chapter 3 will be also dark but only spoiler I can give is chapter 4 will be named " rise and fall of the idiots " which will be about ramirez's and o'malley's back story , their games and where they end up and how they end up there . for the studio I am planing to take them down eventually but I think this story will be 10 chapters so before the dawn there will be some more darkness . new marines , new events , threats , obedience , defiance and sun rise .

11/22/25, 9:44 PM
@[Hypnoboy-7](/user/show/10055892) Thanks for shedding light on where this story is going! I look forward to seeing how it unfolds.
11/22/25, 9:30 PM
Phenomenal story as usual Cicero. As a long time fan of your work, you never cease to amaze me! Love the way your stories are all about heroes, cocky arrogant men, or cops/military studs who get taken down a peg and bitched by seemingly "inferior" men. Your doctor exam or twink/fat top stories have to be some of your best! Keep it up!

11/22/25, 9:31 PM
@[Anubis-2](/user/show/10034886) Thank you. I really appreciate it when someone takes the time to comment. I hope you enjoy the last chapter in the finale which I’m going to submit for posting around Tuesday.
11/22/25, 9:30 PM
That was one amazing story! Great job there. I am now a fan of yours. Keep writing!
J.J.
11/22/25, 8:46 PM
Perfection

11/22/25, 9:11 PM
@J.J. Thanks buddy 🙏 this chapter was sitting in my notes app for six months cos got distracted with other series . I definitely wanna finish the story though
11/21/25, 9:46 AM
I love this serie! I hope you're not planning on ending it, it's so good!

DrA
11/22/25, 7:42 PM
@[Xmale06](/user/show/10053174) Thank you for your feedback! I am a bit swamped with work at the moment but there is a new chapter waiting to be approved!
11/22/25, 7:33 PM
One day, he will continue the story. So sad when they leave it in the open and don’t add anything to it.
11/22/25, 10:45 AM
I believe the tag on this should be “erotic friend fiction,” not fan fiction :) Good dialogue, I kept reading it in their voices and felt very on brand for them. Made me laugh 😂

11/22/25, 6:54 PM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Thanks! Glad to know I made you laugh 😊😊