Recent Comments

11/22/25, 10:09 PM
Okay this chapter is half hot half wholesome. A supportive bicouple. Andy and Parker having a wholesome relationship instead of mindfucked relationship. What a packed chapter. Cant wait to see whats coming next (week, perhaps)
11/17/25, 10:57 PM
Hot story, but it's tough to root for rapists. I hope Drew and Travis get revenge.

11/21/25, 3:06 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I agree with you)

11/21/25, 4:18 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) chapter 3 will be also dark but only spoiler I can give is chapter 4 will be named " rise and fall of the idiots " which will be about ramirez's and o'malley's back story , their games and where they end up and how they end up there . for the studio I am planing to take them down eventually but I think this story will be 10 chapters so before the dawn there will be some more darkness . new marines , new events , threats , obedience , defiance and sun rise .

11/22/25, 9:44 PM
@[Hypnoboy-7](/user/show/10055892) Thanks for shedding light on where this story is going! I look forward to seeing how it unfolds.
11/22/25, 9:30 PM
Phenomenal story as usual Cicero. As a long time fan of your work, you never cease to amaze me! Love the way your stories are all about heroes, cocky arrogant men, or cops/military studs who get taken down a peg and bitched by seemingly "inferior" men. Your doctor exam or twink/fat top stories have to be some of your best! Keep it up!

11/22/25, 9:31 PM
@[Anubis-2](/user/show/10034886) Thank you. I really appreciate it when someone takes the time to comment. I hope you enjoy the last chapter in the finale which I’m going to submit for posting around Tuesday.
11/22/25, 9:30 PM
That was one amazing story! Great job there. I am now a fan of yours. Keep writing!
J.J.
11/22/25, 8:46 PM
Perfection

11/22/25, 9:11 PM
@J.J. Thanks buddy 🙏 this chapter was sitting in my notes app for six months cos got distracted with other series . I definitely wanna finish the story though
11/21/25, 9:46 AM
I love this serie! I hope you're not planning on ending it, it's so good!

DrA
11/22/25, 7:42 PM
@[Xmale06](/user/show/10053174) Thank you for your feedback! I am a bit swamped with work at the moment but there is a new chapter waiting to be approved!
11/22/25, 7:33 PM
One day, he will continue the story. So sad when they leave it in the open and don’t add anything to it.
11/22/25, 10:45 AM
I believe the tag on this should be “erotic friend fiction,” not fan fiction :) Good dialogue, I kept reading it in their voices and felt very on brand for them. Made me laugh 😂

11/22/25, 6:54 PM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Thanks! Glad to know I made you laugh 😊😊
11/22/25, 6:28 PM
this got very sexy and hot at the end
11/22/25, 6:14 PM
Continuing the scary sexy thrills love it