Recent Comments

mbblover
6/19/21, 2:12 PM
PLEASE KEEP THE PSYCHOLOGICAL aspect! the whole power control role reversal and how the musclebound super alpha stud barbarian is both seduced, captured, conquered and converted by both pleasure physically and the re-wiring of his brain is hot hot! also keep the slow burn! many chapters of this slow burn, instead of a quick wham bam thank you mame!.. thank you!

6/19/21, 5:53 PM
Oh god thank you so much, if i didn't misunderstood your comment. I will try to keep this slowww... but if you want me to slow the story down more, i will try my best too. Thank you one more time for your comment <3 love ya @mbblover
Willie Cici
6/19/21, 2:36 PM
I had to edit the story to remove one of the pics as it was no longer available online. Apologies. As usual, the comments regarding sequels surprise me. Any ideas are are welcome.
6/19/21, 1:42 PM
that's an awesome concept. i really loved to read it, making me strain
Martin
6/19/21, 1:40 PM
This is pushing all my buttons! You're on a streak, it seems! I love it!
Martin
6/19/21, 1:33 PM
This was one of your best, Willie! Congrats! Good to see you back!
6/19/21, 1:24 PM
Absolutely one of my new favorites! I hope we can get to follow them with a sequel!
6/19/21, 11:59 AM
Excellent short story (I hope there are more chapters cuming up)! I could visualize all of the action going on while reading. In ways, I wanted to be Billy and then I wanted to be Garrett. You have a gift for storytelling!
Doug
6/19/21, 11:17 AM
Please let there be more yo this wonderfully detailed story.
Jason
6/19/21, 10:09 AM
I hope you are going to continue this! That's a good one!
Jun 17, 2021
6/19/21, 8:25 AM
Fabulous! Extremely well done!!