Recent Comments

6/1/21, 8:38 PM
Commented on the wrong chapter last time. I'm excited to see Priapus again! His little guessing game is one of the hottest scenes in the story so far.
6/1/21, 8:34 PM
I was hoping we'd seen Priapus again soon!
6/1/21, 4:25 PM
hope you continue this series for a while!
6/1/21, 3:50 PM
This is an amazing story. I love the little hints of changing personality. The ghosts going back to calling him master with him no longer objecting. Not to mention what appears to be a newfound much greater appreciation of the male body with him now wishing that the ghosts would dress like Chippendales. I hope the next chapter comes sooner rather than later.
6/1/21, 2:33 PM
An old favorite with chubby, milk making jocks.
6/1/21, 12:07 PM
Great Story but one question what does 'rolling coal' mean?

6/1/21, 2:23 PM
@MrMadness Rolling coal is the act of revving up a diesel engine (and usually because of modification to the computer) to where more diesel fuel enters the engine and emits gray/black smoke out of the exhaust. It's common for a lot of owners of diesel trucks (especially ones who jack their trucks up with lift kits and put big tires on them)
6/1/21, 2:04 PM
enjoying all the chapters so far ! i hope there will be more physical changes too
6/1/21, 1:03 PM
I truly enjoyed this story! Hope there will be another chapter!
6/1/21, 10:41 AM
Submissive Master? Interested to see how this turns out!
Evan
6/1/21, 6:20 AM
Great concept. Who doesn't like a guy being made into a slut. :) Thanks for writing! And congrats on your first story. I wanted to offer you some ideas for formatting your dialogue for your next story that may increase your readership. The English convention when writing is: - Quotation marks "" rather than the double arrows are used for speech to make it clear it is spoken aloud. Example: "What is happening?" he said. - Whenever a different person is speaking, make a new paragraph. It makes it easier to tell that the speaker has changed and breaks up the text so it's not one big paragraph. Example: "Who are you?" I asked. "I'm your friend, Aaron," he said. "Oh," I said.

LuckyFontane
6/1/21, 10:31 AM
@Evan Thank you for your feedback! I just edited the story according to your suggestions and you're right it does look better. It would be great if you could review the style again (when the admins approved the update) :)