Recent Comments

Doug
5/29/21, 3:17 AM
A great start, let's see how it continues
Je
5/29/21, 2:43 AM
Same here! hope we find out!
5/29/21, 1:57 AM
I'm a little sad you hadn't continued further with this story Nacho. I'm really liking the lore.

5/29/21, 2:06 AM
@AnAlphaToBeCharmedKY152 Sorry for taking so long with it :( Chapter 15 is already written, I'd just like to finish chapter 16 before publishing that one, and I have to finish one last chapter for this new story I've started before going back to write Nate and Dave again... Again, sorry for taking so long 😥
5/28/21, 11:39 PM
Did I miss a chapter? I don't think so, but where did babies come from? Other than that, hot story. Glad to see some hairy ass eating and some pit licking. Very hot having the cops in the clan, and soon bikers. And bikers must have raw and seething pits and hole. Woof!

5/29/21, 12:04 AM
Back in chapter 2 or 3 Jessie and Billy got Frank pregnant, these are their twins. I am glad you enjoy the story so far. Hope to have a new chapter up shortly 😊@PupScout
DB
5/28/21, 11:54 PM
Great story. Can't wait to read what happens to Greg
nycboot
5/28/21, 10:51 PM
Great start! I love how your words really convey the mood and atmosphere.
5/28/21, 10:39 PM
The Transformation turned me on, curious where it will lead. Please continue your work, it quite good and enjoyable
5/28/21, 12:40 PM
Great story and very creative writing. You started slow with great descriptions, allowing the reader to get into the action. Your words became hotter and harder. The sex was subtle and then went into full raw lust. Gotta read more of your stories, now that I'm boned! Great job!

5/28/21, 9:10 PM
@MuscleSon69 If I got paid in boners, I'd be richer than Bezos...
5/28/21, 7:30 PM
Hm. The magic might as well retool Jeff's prostate to produce the full complement of androgens that he would need, right? As you describe his clit-only appearance, that prostate seems like it's not going to have very much to output in that regard. Might as well salvage what's left of its function and dedicate it to replacing hormonal production, yeah? Jeff seems most receptive to the magic of the three of them, anyhow.
5/28/21, 5:03 PM
This story ticks off all of my boxes. I love how the salesman seems so refined and old-timey, that's one of the greatest kinks for me. Great writing! I'd love to see more to this story, having Jared serve a new master that the salesman has picked out for him.