Recent Comments

8/4/21, 4:34 PM
great story. thank you
8/4/21, 3:43 PM
I hope to see more eventually
8/4/21, 3:29 PM
Glad I finally go around to reading this one. Very imaginative and cleverly executed!
8/4/21, 3:12 PM
Will there be more chapters?? This was a hit story
Gingcub
8/4/21, 12:40 PM
please let there be a week 3 :)
Doug
8/4/21, 12:07 PM
please please please post the next installment
8/4/21, 10:40 AM
Let see how things go from now on
8/4/21, 8:11 AM
I really like this story, it's a great start ! To me, the mind control parts could be a bit more detailed, like with Noah and the Master : "*the god whispered hypnotic, delightful things into his head. [...] The hushes were so euphoric he could barely hear the last of his free will shouting faintly in protest.*" I'd love to read more about Noah's internal resistance, or what's happening inside him as he succumbs to the Master. At this point he seems like an important character and I want to associate more deeply with him as he got under control. I hope we'll see a following soon ! I'm curious about the Master... I'm sure I'd love to submit to him and join his army ;)
Anonymous
8/4/21, 7:33 AM
Still not sure who ended up with the better deal in the end
Apr 25, 2018
8/4/21, 6:33 AM
I like the aspect of Connor deceiving the father son bots instead of commanding them.