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5/7/21, 3:25 AM
this shit is so hot. i wanna read more stories of people discovering or being lured into hell and transformed in different weird ways. the smoke play here was fucking great too btw
leathertrance
5/6/21, 10:40 PM
I came twice to this on the first read, and that *never* happens. Definitely pushing a lot of my buttons (not the Mowgli thing; I've never watched that movie). Lots of typos, but none that I couldn't figure out easily enough. I know what it's like to rush through writing to stay in the zone, though. I almost think he's going to be ruined for real sex, gay or straight, with his pleasure centers pushed so far beyond what anything natural could produce like that. Hell, maybe ruined for any kind of pleasure offline at all. But I'm sure that's not where you're taking this. And that whole "trained to love something through artificial pleasure" theme is a big favorite of mine. I need to rest up before starting the next chapter, but man am I looking forward to it!

5/7/21, 1:52 AM
@leathertrance Thanks! And you'd better rest up. There are a few chapters to go! haha. I think there will always be something to be apreciated with both virtual and real sex. Depends on the person to be sure, but I think Jese would be the type to still enjoy both. But he's barely scratched the surface in terms of what is possible. So that could change. I'm sure those in the real world will keep things interesting.
5/7/21, 1:45 AM
Oh my stars, *Dace*, this ticks so many of my boxes I can't even. I love the unique characterization you gave to all the wolves, the aborted sex scene was blisteringly hot while it lasted, the emotional connection between Tim and Aed resonates... ugh, this is amazing work.
5/7/21, 1:25 AM
A woman? And a prostitute??!! Oh how that is a turn off, so I'll just read one more sentence. Okay, well, just a few more sentences. Hmmm, it will be interesting to see how this works out. But a woman, I can't read on. But I wonder what the alien is going to do about this joining. Oh, nothing. I guess the alien is not on my side either. The computer is useless too. LOL...that was my thought process reading this. But it was so interesting I had to go on. As stated above, I love how this isn't your normal alien take over story. And with Frank entering the picture, Woof!

5/7/21, 1:43 AM
Haha well I'll admit the female to male transformation was inspired by a story I read, the way the genital transformation occurred was hot so I wanted pay homage in a way. Also the alien is looking to better the planet. Prostitution is Jessie's trauma, Alcoholism is Billy's, and Billy's father has cancer which in my chapter 5 will be developed more. But glad you made it through and enjoyed 😊@PupScout
5/7/21, 1:21 AM
Ooh, I *like*. Not sure why it took so long for me to read this, but I'm sure as hell glad I got to it at last!
May 5, 2021
5/7/21, 12:51 AM
Great first story. Congratulations.
5/7/21, 12:48 AM
LOVE this story! I look forward to how you conclude it and hope for the best for Jake and Willem.
Max
5/7/21, 12:14 AM
I love stories that have some love between the protagonists; especially with the whole arc of Willem's self growth. I personally love happy endings, but please continue the great work with the finale.
Apr 11, 2019
5/6/21, 11:29 PM
This is good fun, but it would be better told from the perspective of the cop (it's more engaging to experience the changes, and the mental confusion that comes with it), and to be shown the farm (the cop being introduced to it) than to be told about it. but it is a super-hot story.
5/6/21, 9:45 PM
Hi Clown Boi I am not sure if you are still checking comments here and I was going to email you. but your email is not listed. This story is amazing and I am begging you to continue it. Maybe you will get me motivated to finish some of mine. Please feel free to contact me at scot6789@yahoo.com.