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Anonymous
11/20/25, 7:02 PM
i have to be honest here. i was dissapointed with this continuation. when you go back and read pollination, not only was it hot & sexy but it showed a community being built & brought together. it seemed that more and more chapters had branching out characters that brought more and more men into the fold. now, not only do we lack the sex and seeing more and more guys being brought into the fold, but we are actively watching that community being torn apart. i felt that the fun was completley sucked out, and replaced with ??? i don't even know what it was replaced with. does the writer hate his own series? it felt like there was an actual hatred for the alien symbionts. go back to the earlier chapters. the men loved their symbionts. there was a bonding not only with the alien, but with the other men. and now it's all gone.

11/20/25, 11:12 PM
@Anonymous There's a lot to address here -- wish me luck. I make no secret of the fact that I wish I'd never written POLLINATION: the SERIES in the first place. I'm not judging the quality of the work, but I wish I'd left the original story on its own like I'd always intended. In P:TS, the mistake I made was in trying to elevate the threat so as not to become a redundant "And Then The Same Thing Happened To Bob" kind of story. I created what I consider to be the greatest blunder of the whole thing: the Great Ones. I believe the intrusion of the Great Ones killed what I was originally trying to do with the plot and forced me to take the story in a different direction -- looking back on it now, I wish I'd never done that. Part of my motivation in Season Two and Three was to get back to my original conceit. That said, I've had the uber-plot written in my head since Season One -- I've hinted at it from time to time in different ways -- but I always expected Season Three to end where it did, The conflict in the current book has been in the process since Season One, as a matter of fact. Ironically, I really enjoyed writing Season Three and I'm excited to pick it up again where I've left it because I'm going to be able to do what I wanted to do with it in the first place. I have a Season Four in mind (and Five!), but I had to clear the detritus. I'm sorry you didn't like it -- I really truly am -- but understand that I love these characters enough to do horrible things to them. And I went WAY over my initial word count because I was enjoying myself so much. There it is -- you can't go home again.

Anonymous
11/21/25, 3:57 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) i can understand and respect everything you said. it just felt like season 3 was such a drastic change from everything that came before. so to me, it sounds like it's not so much a tearing down of what you have built, but a "course-correction"? okay. I can roll with that. because i always felt season 1 was always the best. so if you're trying course-correct back to those ideas or away from the great ones, I would have to agree that this could be a good thing. it was just so hard for me to stomach page after page of men hating their symbionts. I guess when I first read pollination, as a reader, i fantasized having one slide down into my balls. and I imagine every other reader wanted the same thing. and then you gave us season 3 in which you seemed to say no no no, that's bad. it was such a whiplashing u-turn from what I had so love to read.

11/21/25, 1:00 PM
@Anonymous Once the aliens revealed themselves to be the bad guys in Season 2, it stopped being such a party. Suddenly, the men found themselves enslaved to the Great Ones and they were terribly abused at the Kansas Farm, endlessly planting their seed. So I think you're right in Season One being a lighter tone and men more excited about their transformations, but I think Season Two turned that page. Also bear in mind that the entirety of Season Three is just a little over 24 hours. I've kept the characters I like and if you've read me before, you know nobody ever dies forever. I think "reset" is an excellent way to think about it, but there was a lot of shit to get through.
11/21/25, 8:05 AM
Please continue ... This is one of the wholly original stories I've read here in forever. This is brilliant work.
11/21/25, 5:45 AM
Hope this gets updated, I keep re-reading the story almost every week.
11/21/25, 4:16 AM
Can't wait for more
11/20/25, 6:37 PM
It's good that you know where you're taking your story. I hope you'll have interesting characters, not cardboard cutouts. The main character is engaging so far, and I hope he'll continue to reveal more and more sides of himself as a person.

Nico's Beef Co
11/20/25, 7:13 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) I hope to deliver on that. It will be slower series with some chapters being light on sexual scenes to set up everything.

11/20/25, 9:26 PM
@Nico's Beef Co I'm not against sex scenes; in fact, I'm actually for them. The main thing is that everything is well written, so the reader can easily visualize everything. I'd also like to see at least one or two intelligent characters who aren't dumb and act intelligently, just like the protagonist. For example, if the protagonist wants to enslave someone and control them, they'll realize something's wrong with our protagonist and will act suspiciously and very cautiously, conducting an investigation and even learning that they have the ability to control people. I'd like to see not only future victims for the protagonist's harem but also more resourceful characters who can escape or resist once they learn who our protagonist is and what abilities he possesses.

Nico's Beef Co
11/21/25, 3:46 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Yes, I like my characters to have their own agendas and goals. It makes it easier to write longer stories as well. I'm not a big fan of characters getting easily sway or dommed. I want them to resist and sway until the big breaking moment.
11/21/25, 3:45 AM
It seems interesting, but I'd like more character development, which unfortunately wasn't the case in the first book. Who is Owen? Who is Y? What are their goals? How did this start? Can anyone with some sense of humor stop them? And why do the characters sometimes behave so stupidly? There are still a lot of questions, but I hope the answers will appear in the next chapters.
Anonymous
11/21/25, 2:00 AM
Great work as always!
Mark
11/21/25, 1:49 AM
Can't wait for the next part!
11/20/25, 11:29 PM
May not be converted but definitely have me thinking how it would feel, Prostate orgasm is one of my biggest curiosities sir
11/17/25, 6:44 AM
Wonderful stuff. I've never read such a developed, specific reprogramming of the POV, plus orcs! It's also nice and long, original, edited well... Thanks and know that this is my new favorite by far :) Just curious, how did you develop this story? You just sat down and wrote it, or you knew some aspects that you wanted to include and just made them work together? I write bits but I can never flesh out ideas to this degree.

11/20/25, 8:56 PM
@[speaktothemanagerwithin](/user/show/10066984) I’m very glad you enjoyed the story! Having the development complicated specifically feels nice, because I’ve been working hard on making things flow nicely. As for how I’d develop it, I’d say the latter thing you said is accurate. I have some ideas that I know I’m going to include and I find the most natural progression for them throughout the story.