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4/14/21, 12:43 AM
So good. I felt bad for Eli in one paragraph, and then hated the, what did you call him, Douche canoe (LOL) in the next. And his internal struggle was done beautifully, esp as the middle child. I'm glad you made him eat ass, and then like it. Maybe even consider, "and you really like unshowered, acrid scented hole." I hope he turns into an ass eating whore, starting every morning in the kitchen with Dad and bros before they shower, coffee and ass. . Oops, getting carried away with your story, apologies. It is a testament to how well you get the mind going with this story.
CigarMuscle
4/14/21, 12:13 AM
hell yea buddy! great start!!
Anonymous
4/13/21, 11:51 PM
Please make more. This is an awesome story!
4/13/21, 10:30 PM
I agree with Martin -- a wonderful conclusion. It's also really hot when Isaac feels the influence of the suit!
4/13/21, 10:16 PM
This is like missed opportunities I've experienced myself--and how, each time, I'd wished in retrospect they'd gone! Awesome writing again!
4/13/21, 10:06 PM
The near-miss, where they inadvertently touch hands, is, to me, really hot. Looking forward to reading where they go!
4/13/21, 10:05 PM
This story is really good! I really enjoyed the stinky pits and dumbing down. Great job!
4/13/21, 9:55 PM
This is really exciting, and really well-written! The induction at the start, and Finn's self-doubt about his trance-ability, are very vivid and convincing. I'm eager to read what happens to him!
4/13/21, 6:25 PM
This continuation is just as great as the first chapter. I remain eager to see what changes will continue to happen between Norman and Warren. The sex scene was super hot. I kind of want to see Norman and Warren with other men now. Or have a threesome. As well as more reality changes. In any case, I look forward to the next part.

4/13/21, 9:04 PM
@Proteus Thanks for taking the time to comment and share your encouragement! We've got chapter 3 (the end of Warren's sordid little tale, I'm afraid) cocked and ready to go later this week, so you won't wait long to see if your words have rearranged reality to make your dreams come true. Though, for all you know, they were already true to start with... :D