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3/27/21, 8:36 PM
I wish I knew why I liked this series....

Cracker
4/2/21, 12:46 PM
wink@absman420
Anonymous
4/2/21, 7:29 AM
sooo tasty!!!

4/2/21, 12:12 PM
Thank you, glad you enjoyed
RJG
3/19/21, 5:05 PM
Nice. And a great file you linked to, really liked it.

4/2/21, 8:42 AM
@RJG thanks for reading glad you enjoyed the file as well :D
Apr 1, 2021
4/2/21, 6:33 AM
great, just great. could definitely read more. so hot
3/31/21, 4:56 PM
I'm so sorry everyone. I am crushed by school right now so it's probably not coming until the end of April. Forgive me. 🥺

Gasuda
4/2/21, 5:59 AM
Forgiven. Kill those classes, you sexy, dirtyminded kinkster! @GiveInToTheMusk
4/2/21, 5:31 AM
Haha, I've really loved how you've played with dumb-to-smart (at least in terms of vocab), and him getting brain-drained by the dick was super hot. Loving this series, and can't wait for more!
4/2/21, 5:01 AM
I love the story about the improvisation of reward and punishment. Although the story is about rush, i can suggest to have a substory category of each boys... how to described their own experience in a more details ways... and of course videos which will be sent to the contractor of the deed (Mr. Parker). It can also showcase the story of how Mr Parker do reacts on the submitted evidence.. lols.. since it appears that he is starting to loosen up.. pun intended... hahahaha.. lols..
4/2/21, 4:58 AM
> great build up. erect and hoping for more chapters
4/2/21, 2:51 AM
a very very hot story so happy to have found it. pony play is not a common theme and you do it so nice wish there was more to the story.
Apr 1, 2021
Anonymous
4/1/21, 7:40 AM
Very hot story and well written too

4/1/21, 10:12 AM
@ I'm gratified that you enjoyed it. For some reason, the "writing" rating on my stories tends to be the lowest rating on them (authors can actually see the aggregate scores for the categories of their story ratings). I'm not sure why that is, but it's nice to know that someone appreciates my writing. :)

Evan
4/2/21, 2:14 AM
I thought the writing was fantastic @controlme. I loved this story from start to finish. Great pacing, great payoff. I loved the subtle manipulation and oblivious obedience and submission. Very hot. Thanks for writing.