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Dec 24, 2014
3/25/21, 12:08 AM
liked story but want to c its end.....what about the brother?
3/24/21, 11:19 PM
gutted you haven't uploaded part two yet! heres hoping you haven't forgot :)
3/24/21, 11:12 PM
Great story. I like your choice of animals. I hate to write negative things, but before I do, your English is very good, no different than a native speaker. But the lack of punctuation is distracting. The story is well written but needs the punctuation to set the pace and define the details.
3/24/21, 9:46 PM
Thank you 😊
3/24/21, 9:45 PM
so far my favorite!
3/24/21, 9:31 PM
Enjoyed this very hot continuation of the story.
3/24/21, 9:28 PM
loved the story! very well thought out, descriptive & hot. bring on the next chapt plz.....
3/24/21, 9:22 PM
This is extremely hot!
3/24/21, 9:08 PM
This is excellent. Lucas's transformation into a needy little slut is HOT! And I love how he has to be BROKEN, resistant boy that he is (was).
3/24/21, 8:42 PM
Hey, Hypnothrill! Thank you for your kind comments. As to release strategy, I very much indeed hesitated to put all this material out at once. However, after posting Part One and Part Two, I tossed and turned and was really worried that those opening Parts are rather slow. They're slow, in my opinion, because, right the way through Part Two, the eroticism isn't yet really obvious, more just beneath the surface, and I know that most readers -- including myself oftentimes! -- are impatient to get to the action. So I went back and added Part Three. Because, in Part Three, Skeeter definitely gets some action! Thank you for having read! Cheers, Logan