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8/15/25, 9:11 PM
Short but hot!
8/15/25, 5:57 PM
Excellent story - one of the best I have read for a long time. Please write more.

8/15/25, 8:41 PM
@[HudsonUK2](/user/show/10001682) Glad you liked the story! I'll try to do some more pompifications!
Mark
8/15/25, 7:51 PM
Loved this story and would love for it to continue!

8/15/25, 8:33 PM
@Mark I wouldn’t rule out the possibility, but it won’t be right away
8/15/25, 5:58 PM
Really hot start to the story, Kyle! Looking forward to seeing where the Triad takes Robin. Thanks for sharing your story with the group!

8/15/25, 8:32 PM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) Thank you.
8/15/25, 8:30 PM
Short and sweet!
8/14/25, 1:21 PM
So damn good. Made me look at my harness in a whole new light….I almost had to put it on…felt wrong reading the story without it…you hit all the sweet spots with your writing!

8/15/25, 4:31 PM
@[Pupwhosits](/user/show/10052184) Love knowing it landed just right. Maybe the harness needs to be part of your reading ritual now...

8/15/25, 6:52 PM
@[Nothingville](/user/show/1356823) not a bad idea!
8/15/25, 6:43 PM
Excellent
8/14/25, 6:15 PM
I've yet to read the chapter. I just had to start by saying how funny oddly satisfying it was to see the name "Theg" appearing in the description all chill like

8/14/25, 6:45 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Theg supremacy :raised_hands:

8/15/25, 4:27 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Update: Just finished the chapter. It's hard to pick my favorite part here. I wonder if what Theg saw really was a memory or not, and how Oscars was able to affect ~~Aroma~~ Fauxki (amazing name by the way). Also, the right in front of my salad didn't go unnoticed it it was very much appreciated

8/15/25, 6:26 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) I'm glad to hear you are enjoying it! The next chapter *might* just be even sillier. In terms of when any answers will be coming, i couldnt say :rofl:
8/15/25, 3:17 PM
Your writing is excellent as usual. It's descriptive but not overly so. And honestly, even if you didn't tell us that the chapter is split in two I would see this as a completely valid and excellent chapter. You don't have to insert a "proper" sex scene to make a chapter hot and wank worthy. I'd even go as far as to say that it sometimes it's even better this way. I might be the odd one out here, but I feel bad for Ryan. It seems like _maybe_ aside for Malakye and the coach, the whole team just abuses him verbally and see him as nothing more than a punching bag. Do they even like him? Not to mention that the coach is also manipulating him and it seems that he doesn't really like him either. Like, I get that they want to drill their superiority over him, but the first thing that a newbie does when he gets in is to first of all berate Ryan and no one bothers to even say something in his favor. To clarify, I'm not opposed to them teasing him, dominating him and showing him who's superior there. It's also completely understandable and inherent that the coach manipulates him. I just think that it would be nice if the rest of the team would also show some acceptance and liking to him. He is a part of the team after all... Having said all of that, I'm really glad you're back! I've been missing your writing and hoping that you'll come back soon. I hope things are well with you and that it's the good kind of busy.

8/15/25, 6:04 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) i think i said in the first chapter that DEI rules mean they have to hire at least 1 white player, and they are only interested in turning him into the team cum dump. They think he's beneath them.
8/15/25, 12:07 PM
Robin learns humiliation in the beginning of what I hope is a long story.

8/15/25, 5:08 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) 👍👍