Recent Comments

Mark
11/21/25, 1:49 AM
Can't wait for the next part!
11/20/25, 11:29 PM
May not be converted but definitely have me thinking how it would feel, Prostate orgasm is one of my biggest curiosities sir
11/17/25, 6:44 AM
Wonderful stuff. I've never read such a developed, specific reprogramming of the POV, plus orcs! It's also nice and long, original, edited well... Thanks and know that this is my new favorite by far :) Just curious, how did you develop this story? You just sat down and wrote it, or you knew some aspects that you wanted to include and just made them work together? I write bits but I can never flesh out ideas to this degree.

11/20/25, 8:56 PM
@[speaktothemanagerwithin](/user/show/10066984) I’m very glad you enjoyed the story! Having the development complicated specifically feels nice, because I’ve been working hard on making things flow nicely. As for how I’d develop it, I’d say the latter thing you said is accurate. I have some ideas that I know I’m going to include and I find the most natural progression for them throughout the story.
11/20/25, 8:37 PM
Incredible. Thank you Sir. 😊
11/20/25, 7:58 PM
Your skill of world building, when the focus is just two characters is crazy good. We have slang like “the howl” and literature that exists, which makes everything feel more alive. Awesome story.
Anonymous
11/20/25, 7:41 PM
This is one of my all-time favorites. So hot!
Anonymous
11/20/25, 7:40 PM
Any chance this will ever be continued? I know it’s not likely but this was such a good story that I can’t help but hope there will be more someday. .
11/20/25, 5:47 PM
An interesting beginning and prologue to the story. It's clear from the plot that if the story continues, something more awaits us, so I'll be keeping an eye on it.

Nico's Beef Co
11/20/25, 6:14 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) thank you very much for the comment! And yes, I already have chapters 3 and 4 ready to upload/while having 5 to 10 plotted out! The vibes are going to be slightly action pack sci-fi with lots of fucking! I feel like this series is already starting stronger than my old one.
11/20/25, 2:48 PM
Will there be more?

Anonymous
11/20/25, 4:08 PM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971)
11/20/25, 3:02 PM
Can't wait for more