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GWR
8/16/25, 5:51 PM
I’d probably be considered pretty vanilla here - this story really hit my buttons - big sub smaller top, hypnosis, subs life otherwise continues as normal, and dom who seems to care about not ruining his subs life - just making him his. In terms of shaving - I like the body hair. Maybe start with something targeted, like shaved crotch/cock/balls, or maybe crack so he can feel that thong sliding around in there? Also, more quasi-sexual obedience when in Mike mode - Josh rubbing Mike’s ass when he undresses, maybe some playful tugs of his thong? Or Mike stripping his thong off and giving it to Josh while standing for ‘inspection’ before bed. Could also have Mike show up earlier to do his homework in his thong, his hormones temporarily muted by unconsciously happy to be in his masters presence but knowing his master wants him to focus on his work.
8/16/25, 8:55 AM
Another great chapter. I wished he cursed all of the other rednecks and turnes that bar into a new gay spot for the town.

8/16/25, 5:19 PM
@[Dreamer_Br](/user/show/10042048) I did think about it. Seriously did. But I liked the idea of him showing who's really in charge a lot better. Leaves them scared, and I am only writing one more chapter on top of that.
Anonymous
8/16/25, 3:19 PM
Wow, I loved this chapter! Eagerly awaiting more.
8/15/25, 11:42 PM
Amazing! I am absolutely loving how you described the sexual tension and denial that chastity can bring. How all those pent up hormones are affecting every aspect of his life. All that all consuming need that he can't itch. You express in words so few can. What's even better, is that the cage is his literal leash. Those nanobots alter him, but its the cage that keeps in line. And I hope it never comes off. This method to control and dominate a superhero is so rare. And frankly, it doesn't seem practical for the Triad to remove it. With it, they can mold him and condition him to what they want. A superhero in their image. While also be made to do more and more assigned tasks to get off. And I could easily see them having him perform more and more sexual acts to get off all the while. With all of this, it doesn't necessarily mean the cage comes off for him to cum. Dick will need to sexually push himself to cum through the cage. Which won't be as satisfying, but it can dim down the furnace in him. This is a story with a lot of potential.

8/16/25, 10:46 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thanks.
Dec 29, 2023
Anonymoose
8/16/25, 10:10 AM
WOWWWW just came across this story, new kink unlocked! You said in another comment there are other chapters you had worked on, just wondering how far along you are? I'm so excited to see what happens next!
Anders
8/16/25, 9:46 AM
Such a hot chapter! The humiliation and small dick manipulation works extremely well. Can’t wait for the next!
9/10/23, 3:30 PM
I'm a bit confused by this ending. We're lead to believe that Eddie can very rapidly seize control of people just with his voice, but he makes no attempt to use his power here, he just kinda says "no fair, stop it!". I assumed this would be dealt with by him getting quickly gagged or something but he just... lets it happen....

8/16/25, 6:57 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) The answer to your confusion is contained in just one sentence so easy to miss: "They won’t listen to you… I have coded my voice to their trance programming… Like a laptop… They have two users and only the user can log-off their control…"
8/16/25, 6:20 AM
Still dazed and confused, and now totally nervous and on edge.
9/1/23, 3:42 PM
I'm backing away from my "long game" theory in the previous chapter because it stretches credulity that Eddie would go so far as to arrange for himself to be covertly monitored. Which brings us back to the version where Matt wins by virtue of becoming the Greatest Evil.

9/1/23, 4:30 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) I’m wondering if there is no winner and actually Matt & Eddie end up joining forces . Eddie did say to Matt they are like each other

9/1/23, 4:33 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) It would certainly be a new creative direction for the author : his previous stories were consistently singularly decisive

9/1/23, 7:13 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Must admit, I still want Eddie to win , hoping he wanted Matt all along 😳

8/16/25, 5:58 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Ah! but what if Eddie has secretly installed security cameras around the apartment and already knows about Matt's growing capabilities?! If that is the case, Eddie will likely lose interest in toying with Matt and may wish instead to enslave him fully to the void. ...only my reading the next chapter will reveal the answer (or at least the next piece of a puzzle and my deepening quandary about this whole mess). [To the author my apologies for referring to your story as "this whole mess". I truly meant that in the nicest way, reflecting only on my admiration to you for your wonderful imagination, the incredible way you weave your words into a amazingly tangled (but entirely enjoyable) web.]
8/16/25, 5:39 AM
This situation is getting so convoluted. At this point i don't know who to hope will win out. I had been feeling very positive about Matt, but then his perspective took a turn for the worse with Mr. Fadden. I certainly don't want Ryan, Richard, Nathan, Moore, or Fadden to have their lives ripped away from them. Total power exchange without full knowledge and consent and in the end complete destruction for the slaves isn't right or fair; in fact it's downright evil. But then this is fantasy, and in some ways Eddie is a sympathetic character. He's had a hard life. He's intelligent, outwardly friendly, understanding, and one might think even generous by granting his slaves a stress-free existence and blissful almost continuous sexual gratification. I'm just so dazed and confused that I'm ready to ask Eddie for his help. I should probably read the next chapter before making any final decisions.