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3/12/21, 3:57 PM
Great chapter. I can't believe Riley didn't go back with the guys. He's so in love or infatuated he passed up a chance to get his hands on Marc's cock. Did Marc bottom for the first time? Did he and Tanner tag team Smith all night? Did he have to teach Tanner how to top Smith with a hands on / dick in approach? Marc may have to drive the train.
3/12/21, 3:19 PM
Really enjoying this direction. Keep it up!
3/12/21, 3:17 PM
This series has been all sex so far. Well done hot steamy sex, and done just right, Derek Williams style. This chapter has a bit of a shift with the focus on Riley and his questions making the reader (me) slow down and think a bit. What is surprising is that I’m interested in where that’s going and feel like it’s already elevated this story to more than just some well done hot sex scenes. I also really loved the set up in the first part. Where the counselor tells the narrator something stupid to do, and he ignores it and instead buys a magic ring. Great tone and really funny, right before the first hot sexy scene with Riley. Who is really hot in every scene he’s in.
3/12/21, 2:32 PM
Loved it! Amir sounds like a great guy to know. Hehe.
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3/12/21, 1:13 PM
hot story... great writting...
3/12/21, 1:13 PM
Really enjoying your new series, Derek! I look forward to future chapters.
3/12/21, 12:11 PM
need to know more on how this ends....
3/12/21, 11:54 AM
Really looking forward to him getting his brother's. THe father's transformation has been awesome!
3/12/21, 11:12 AM
Hey, I love this story 😍 Can't wait to see what will happen next 😍 I would love it if riley would buy himself a ring or steal the ring from marc and using it against him(marc). But this is just an idea of mine, can't wait for the next part of the story. Keep up the amazing work ☺️