Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/9/25, 9:58 PM
Very Hot
3/9/25, 9:11 PM
Can't wait to see where it goes from there- agreed with others, Tyson seems done for. Will be interesting to see what Mike is up to and if he can save everyone.
Lavender Lad
3/9/25, 8:23 PM
The world is so unfair why can't this happen to me
Mark
3/9/25, 7:34 PM
Very hot!
You can use your
3/9/25, 5:57 PM
You can use the comments that you have to continue the story and makes it a little bit of what you previously have and maybe some details from different stories to sprinkling it in yours
3/9/25, 4:04 PM
Excellent work! PLEASE keep going, I wanna see the boys keep losing themselves in the game
3/9/25, 1:03 PM
Another fall of a great superhero. Can he be redeemed? Is there a power out there to help restore him to his former glory. The fans, including me, simply wait for the next thrilling episode from their hero, the author Jack! We love you Jack.
Anonymous
3/9/25, 11:59 AM
So hot!
Anonymous
3/9/25, 6:52 AM
Fuck, the whole story is quite hot, I've told you before, but the chapters of Nick being corrupted and twisted, with him thinking about his failure as a hero and his need to belittle himself and be servile are fire. I love his new costume! Would be great if you go deeper into the descriptions of how the gear looks and how it feels: the slippery surface of rubber; the squeeky sounds it make when you move; the feeling of it squeezing the body; the weird sensation of being hot and cold at the same time (that have happened to me when I wear it); how sweaty you get inside of it; the feeling when you or somebody put lubricant on you to make you look shinier... sorry, I don't want to be annoying, but as you may have noticed, I'm a rubber enthusiast LOL. If you allow me a suggestion, you could give some rubber hip waders to some of your characters (not necesarily Nick). Those look super hot, and since those are made to be into mud or water, you know, to get dirty, the implication is that it's a piece of gear that a person in a high rank would rarely or never use, so they're more for the opposite of a boss (I like roleplay too, you can say). Same goes for certain models or rubber boots or long gloves in bright colors or in thick rubber, used by janitors, heavy workers, etc. And a friend of mine said some people like to put lubricant or other substance inside waders, boots, gloves and rubber suits, you know, to maximize pleasure and give different sensations, so... Sorry if I've talk too much. I blame Nick for that, he being mentally corrupted and becoming less and less heroic give me so many thinks to think about! Keep making great stories, I love your work!

3/9/25, 11:15 AM
@Anonymous Thank you very much! And don't worry, there's no such thing as talking too much here! (Otherwise I'd be in trouble,...) I appreciate your suggestions and your insights, so maybe they'll shape some things to come. We'll see :3