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Anonymous
2/5/21, 3:07 PM
to be continued ? Who is Tom ? Also you really never explained the bully, zane & what he did to you. You can make a series of this. more details the better ! It paints a better picture ! Don't forget details of the settings around you. For Example: Like it was a bright sunny morning, the red Cardinals were chirping happily. The sky was a beautiful Alaskan blue with a few white cottony clouds. Good luck ! looking forward to reading more of your "work". Remember it's not work if you are enjoying it. So go ahead & Enjoy Life!
2/5/21, 2:24 PM
love it!
Anonymous
2/5/21, 12:18 PM
I loved this. Please make more
Mar 19, 2013
Scott
2/5/21, 10:27 AM
shame more of this story never cane along. its a hot theme. we done.
2/5/21, 9:57 AM
Very good thanks - and a great ending!
2/5/21, 7:34 AM
This was difficult to read, it kept changing perspectives without warning, and I gave up halfway through. I became too confused as to which was Danny-turned-into-Greg and which was Greg-turned-into-Danny. This seems like a decent first draft, the body-swap idea is fascinating, but it definitely needs some thorough editing.
Kent
2/5/21, 7:16 AM
more pleaseeee
Dom
2/5/21, 5:53 AM
Damn this is hot, your writing really captures all the things you wanna hear
2/5/21, 4:58 AM
Thanks. I wasn't really sure how this one would turn out but I liked the idea of being in someones head as they were on the journey. The first section actually came to me while I was half alseep so seemed right to start there.
2/5/21, 3:06 AM
Really enjoyed the story, and hoping to see a follow-up in the same universe. Taking the time to lay out that lore might as well use it to show some other sides of the world. Shared this with a few friends that really enjoyed it. Some questions we had were about the logistics. Do they wear out, can they be used up? Do they die? Hope to see some of this in the future. Personal highlight for me was the junior manager at the marketing company. Him being an ass and showing the bad end that could be in store. And being so full of himself that he asks if he wants the change to be permanent.