Hey Eddy! The first chapter is hot but the second is **really steamy hot!** You definitely have the gray morality going here. I think i am seeing where you are going with this, and i love it, so looking forward to more! (Please, Sir, may i have more?!) i am feeling like you have instilled in me a similar dichotomy of sexual need as Luke's genetically engineered sex toy (i going to call him Proto1 until you give him a name.), and apparently also somewhat similar to Luke. As a submissive bottom who gets hugely turned on by male pheromones and edging, i totally relate to Proto1's reactions to Luke's edging sessions, starting with this huge buildup of lust heightened by the augmented pheromones, through lust overload, mind overload, mind trying to shut itself down but unable to shut out the cock sensations or resulting energy of lust running amok through the body and mind, essentially creating a very hypnotic mental state with laser focus only on the edging and the lust. Then Luke accidently introduces Proto1's mind-blowing orgasm, and creates this whole new torturous feeling of unbearable sensitivity, pulling Proto1's mind out of its blank state created to protect against the edging lust, and then forcing the mind to shut out this new torturous sensitivity by shutting down again. On the other hand, Proto1's lack of control over his own sexual torture must be totally maddening. That, combined with his need to serve, this latest training in stimulating over-the-top sexual experiences, and his uncontainable need to be the powerful Alpha Top seems to set a stage for ravaging retribution. Luke, on the surface, would seem to have his own dichotomy. On one side he is a scientist with his trained unemotional objectivity, which oddly seems combined with his sexual sadism. Presumably just like the rest of his scientific endeavors, Luke does seem to enjoy his sadistic treatment of Proto1 only in a coldly objective and uncompassionate way, and perhaps doesn't even think of it as sadistic. On the other hand Luke is such a bottom boy that he gets a lot of pleasure out of giving blowjobs, and prides himself in this skill. Perhaps subconsiously he actually lusts after the idea of being edged and subjected to forced orgasms. In my own case i not only get extremely aroused by the descriptions of the strong pheromonal effects on both subjects, and the edging and forced orgasms, i am oddly annoyed by Luke's unfeeling attitude towards Proto1. i feel Proto1's frustration at being repeatedly built up and denied with no intention of every allowing him to orgasm at any point, then later forced to orgasm for hours and hours. i feel his need to command and control his surroundings, including Luke. To me this just seems right and just. To sum up my reaction to your story, Eddy, thank you so much for sharing yourself through your writing. i am so excited to read more and can't hold my excitement back. Like Proto1, i am ready to bust a nut, so please publish the rest of the story soon!! ~david

clear, sharp - to the point and so hot

Vikingforce - what have you written? When you put your time into a story and post something, then you can make orders. Until then, shut the **** up!

such a great story! I remember this one and its really damn good.

so hot! would love to see Gaynz push him to even more extremes of size.

I happen to favor superhero stories, although many of them fall short. This one does not. I enjoyed chapter 7, especially when GL was forced to explain the device that blitzed him to his criminal wardens. Initially I was not so enthused with the latter part of the chapter 7. However, I agree with the others that chapter 8 was far and above the best so far. Although I enjoyed GL being used sexually in the cab, the inner conflict with the "old" GL and the "new" GL was erotically exciting. The back and forth struggle was the high point of the chapter. I also like the idea of pairing GL with another superhero or cop. The ongoing humiliation of GL is exciting. I favor keeping him masculine and muscular rather than having him get fat. I also favor having him naked or in his recalibrated uniform over him wearing women's undergarments. That is a preference, not a complaint. You are doing wonderfully well, and I greatly appreciate it. Keep up the good work.

phenomenal

@hypno-dummy Tysm! Appreciate the kind comments. I guess we will have to wait and see what the finale holds 😈😉

@Hypnothrill I've been reading your work for five years, love. I should hope I'd have picked up a few things by now! ;p And there are definitely some funny moments! I think you could make the case, though, that Zane being the protagonist makes it *scarier.* Seeing Nick be subsumed by the bland, mindless, "All-American Boy" archetype is definitely scary, but at the very least he would go down fighting and shows awareness of the issues at hand. But Zane is apathetic and only concerned with his OWN desires ("Yeah, I guess that sucks, but what can I do?"). I think that is a whole lot scarier--because not caring is a path that leads people to actually be "transformed" into doing what others want. As for the "Chad attraction"--I'm not going to lie, I find frat guys like this attractive, too. But I think there's a very real correlation between what you say about the "physical ideal" and white supremacy. This notion of white, muscular, square-jawed MAN as the ultimate fantasy for all men (gays want them, straights want to be them) is the result of 300+ years of Western society carefully cultivating an image via every form of media, while using similar propaganda to dehumanize other races and cast whiteness in a utopian light. And like it or not, we're ALL affected by that cultivation. Propaganda and culture affects us all... Thanks for the story and the discourse! :)

Please update!!!