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12/9/25, 2:57 PM
I thought the dragon would send the fallen hero back to maintaining a false peace by day and indulging in the game of desire by night, but things didn't turn out as I expected, haha.

12/10/25, 4:11 AM
@[Ozzy](/user/show/10048159) That would have been a fun idea, but I just can't see Mr. Dragon letting his pet off his leash for that long. Now, if the Light Dragon still decides to send another hapless hero after him,... well, maybe that's the sort of fate the two Dark Dragons might come up with to pass the time.
Anonymous
12/10/25, 4:10 AM
God I absolutely loved every part of this
Anonymous
12/10/25, 4:06 AM
This was such an amazing chapter and I loved reading it. You wove the main plots all happening at once together so well!
12/8/25, 7:49 PM
Another great chapter

12/10/25, 1:41 AM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) Thanks!
12/10/25, 1:41 AM
If you ever decide to write more, I'd love a chapter of turning the tables, giving some justice to Alan, freeing him again (and a payback for Oscar, though I can understand why he'd want to escape this fate). Then again, I'm a sucker for good endings, so that's just me
Anonymous
12/10/25, 12:31 AM
This has been one of my favourite reads on here. I’m very excited to see more! I really like your writing style and the complexity of emotions that he’s feeling, it’s honestly been eye opening and thank you for your candour around RSD struggles it gave me things to reflect on personally. The last few chapters truly had my heart strings in a knot was teary eyed for most of them, the end here has been a nice diversion from that. I’m very excited to see how you develop the story following this especially with the stalker and anonymous man being brought into the foreground a little more!
12/10/25, 12:03 AM
Another great fresh take on the concept. I hope that you explore this world more; there is lots of potential!
12/8/25, 1:34 PM
wow, brutal and unsparing and one spark of hope. I'm loving this.

12/8/25, 8:41 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10022083) One spark of hope is all he needs!

12/9/25, 9:51 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10022083) brutal indeed! Wow!
12/9/25, 8:54 PM
Oh yeah, yes please I would happily become pig pup. Any takers to transform me please
greg
12/9/25, 8:45 PM
i love this story i been searching for a man like the salesperson