Recent Comments

Jan 22, 2021
Anonymous
1/22/21, 3:46 PM
spectacular
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 3:30 PM
Wow. This is great. Reminds me of a similar straight story on mcstories. Pacing is excellent. The suspense added when John tries to get to the generator was very nice. I could definitely see you getting more mileage out of this. One of the other employees at the lab could use the device while John introduces Rob to his new home.
1/22/21, 3:00 PM
Wonderful story!
1/22/21, 2:53 PM
Amazing story and incredible transformations! I hope there is more!
1/22/21, 2:34 PM
I definitely need to see more of this. hope there are plenty of changes!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 2:33 PM
I'm fairly new to this forum but having been a fan of your writing over at MC stories for a very long time I was thrilled to see this submission. I absolutely love the story it was great! I only wish it hadn't started out so fast. I would have loved to have seen small changes made and some small perception of the changes. I find it so incredibly exciting when they're aware that something has changed but not quite sure what. loved this!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 2:09 PM
So Hot Man, Thank You!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 1:09 PM
Your writing is incredibly hot. Loved this story!
Rock Creek Werewolf
1/22/21, 11:42 AM
bravo! you should consider writing more!
Anonymous
1/22/21, 11:40 AM
I think a watersports round would be hot, and yeah, it's the obvious choice, but Victor