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1/4/21, 8:53 PM
You're so right, Kaksks. I decided to cut scene and skip to several hours later, partly because I didn't feel like writing a detailed scene of mental resistance and submission, but also because I imagined that in this case it would be a pretty slow process, one that would last for hours and couldn't easily be conveyed in "real time." I felt like, at the beginning, it would really feel like more of a rape scene, as Liam struggles against Paul and Martin penetrating him with their foot-long cocks. And while I wanted to allude to that, I didn't really feel like depicting it in graphic detail.
1/4/21, 8:34 PM
I loved this chapter, very hot story. If I may, though - one of my favorite parts of your stories is the detailed description of the moment when the main character succumbs, and it seems like we fast-forwarded past that part this time. I would have loved to read about how it felt as the plastic pushed deeper and deeper into him and fused with his brain or spinal cord, for example.
1/4/21, 6:14 PM
Somnus, don't give up on your half-finished stories. You don't know how long I've been hacking away at this one. I wrote the first little section (the opening scene with Liam and Martin) more than two years ago, then I wrote the next section (up to Paul's arrival) about two months ago, and then I finally found time and inspiration to finish it all up yesterday. I don't really like writing that way, because it's hard for me to get back into the erotic groove of a story after I put it down for a while. But it can be done. As with anything, practice makes perfect.
1/4/21, 5:59 PM
Hot! I love it !
1/4/21, 5:53 PM
Proper pacing, hot story, indeed good as a standalone. Very hot!
Somnus
1/4/21, 5:19 PM
Another top notch story. I don't recall really liking the first two installments but i'm loving this which i do think speaks to how well it works as a stand alone. Simple but effective world building, sexy scenes and a hot transformation. What more could we ask for? I have so many half finished stories and bullet pointed ideas. Tbh it's in hopes of producing something of this quality that I keep hacking away at my little projects..
1/4/21, 5:19 PM
Great work!
1/4/21, 4:16 PM
Oh wow this story is so sweet and sexy x3
1/4/21, 4:11 PM
Couldn't have done it any better myself. Bravo!
1/4/21, 4:00 PM
lets see how the things will change