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9/9/23, 9:34 AM
One thing that has always fascinated me about this kink and this community and their stories In General is the fine line that the stories have between hot and disturbing, I think this story has a ton of potential and seems very interesting; it doesn't turn me on, not particularly, but as a piece of writing I do find it quite gripping. Currently in my own stories I too try to play a balancing act between the viscerally disturbing and the erotic, or downright pornographic. The last time a story in this site made my skin crawl but not because of anything negative but rather because of how the horrifying coexisted so effortlessly with the sexual was with Edlams Re-educator; although that story did manage to get a little too intense for me at times.

8/15/25, 7:02 AM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) Hello again, Sir! i agree that it is odd how closely some of these stories meld feelings of mild horror and sexual excitement. Perhaps a reader's reaction to such stories depend on whether he is Dom or sub, Sadist or masochist, Top or bottom. It seems you appreciate the writing style (not sure exactly what it is about it that appeals) but are not sexually aroused. On the other hand i found the intelligence, the power, dominance, and control of the Dominant enthralling. ...And all i can remember about the writing style is that there were no errors that i noticed! i think another factor affecting our response to these stories is the lens we are using at the time to color our perspective. i can forgive and/or ignore many ethical and moral issues when i think of the story as fantasy. If the story is written in a way that smacks of more realism, then i am less forgiving of intentional hateful or hurtful behavior. (Fortunately for me if the story is hot enough and within reasonable ethical limits, i can even ignore the 'bad stuff' in otherwise rather disturbing stories.) Oh! by the way, thanks so much for the reading recommendation. "Re-educator" by EdIam on MCStories is now very high on my reading list. i'll let you know whether my skin crawls or i really get into it on my hands and knees. :)
Bottom Jock
8/14/25, 10:34 PM
Mmm god this gets me so turned on. I love the guidance Ryan is getting from coach and the reinforcement from all his teammates about his place on the team. Next thing Ryan needs (besides BBC inside him) are some plump DSLs and a bubble butt from the supplements.

8/15/25, 1:43 AM
@Bottom Jock lol i have absolutely no idea what a DSL is...

Bottom Jock
8/15/25, 2:12 AM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) Lol it stands for Dick Sucking Lips

8/15/25, 5:11 AM
@Bottom Jock oh lol

Bottom Jock
8/15/25, 6:25 AM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) It's been such a hot story imagining Ryan's POV. Thank you for writing!!
8/15/25, 3:06 AM
Enjoyed the idea, though you can tell this is AI written - it's over bloated and not particularly well structured, and has contradictions in continuity. Still hot though.
8/15/25, 2:25 AM
this slow burn is making me leak precum so much, I love it!
Feb 17, 2024
8/15/25, 12:08 AM
More please
8/15/25, 12:06 AM
Damn that was hot as fuck. How did I miss this series? Mission accomplished. You got me to cum. Hope you continue this series. Thanks for posting.
8/14/25, 11:32 PM
Cool story of cock sleeves.
Bottom Jock
8/14/25, 10:22 PM
Fuckkkk this is so hott! I love that Ryan's cock is shrinking, it's down to 6 inches if my math is correct. I'm hoping his muscular butt grows along with his other muscles. It's so hot imagining our caged protagonist in those tight white football pants with his ass constantly on display. Especially as those pants get see thru the more he sweats from getting worked at practice.
Bottom Jock
8/14/25, 10:07 PM
What a dream cum true!! Love this story so far. The only thing I can beg for is that Ryan's butt grows while his dick shrinks! Please please write that in. His butt can grow from all the squats and lunges.
8/14/25, 9:57 PM
This story felt complex in the best way possible. It's not easy to manage many characters at once, and yet you did not only that but also created every possible combination of relationship, their transformation, and a satisfying outcome. Many sexy scenes as well! I wish I had the money to pay this room, honestly :grin: