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12/10/25, 5:30 AM
best story
12/10/25, 4:59 AM
Excellent stuff! I'll admit I always have a soft spot of characters like Aaron- somebody has to do all the (over)working and (over)thinking that keeps the world moving forward! Rooting for him to find a way to happiness without losing his mind. xx
12/10/25, 4:44 AM
This was a great story, and I deodnitely look forward to more chapter on this series. It was an interesting take to describe the mergee experience and part of the whole ride even as a fave on a muscle. This is definitely a new one that would be awesome to explore on future stories. That Hugh character was awesome, a mountain of muscle walking about with 10 merged guys in his body. It was especially funny to read how he doesn't like to ear alone, despite having at least 10 guys absorbed into his muscles. Though, now that I think about it, after giving so much detail about Hugh, I half expected to see more of his and his various absorbed guys as part of the main action. Lets say some scene showing Hugh merging 2 more guys into him, or lets say Brian as a face now on Noel's chest bonded more with one or two faces on Hugh's body. Either way, great story, fresh, looking forward to more, and so on.
12/10/25, 4:14 AM
Loved it
12/9/25, 2:57 PM
I thought the dragon would send the fallen hero back to maintaining a false peace by day and indulging in the game of desire by night, but things didn't turn out as I expected, haha.

12/10/25, 4:11 AM
@[Ozzy](/user/show/10048159) That would have been a fun idea, but I just can't see Mr. Dragon letting his pet off his leash for that long. Now, if the Light Dragon still decides to send another hapless hero after him,... well, maybe that's the sort of fate the two Dark Dragons might come up with to pass the time.
Anonymous
12/10/25, 4:10 AM
God I absolutely loved every part of this
Anonymous
12/10/25, 4:06 AM
This was such an amazing chapter and I loved reading it. You wove the main plots all happening at once together so well!
12/8/25, 7:49 PM
Another great chapter

12/10/25, 1:41 AM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) Thanks!
12/10/25, 1:41 AM
If you ever decide to write more, I'd love a chapter of turning the tables, giving some justice to Alan, freeing him again (and a payback for Oscar, though I can understand why he'd want to escape this fate). Then again, I'm a sucker for good endings, so that's just me
Anonymous
12/10/25, 12:31 AM
This has been one of my favourite reads on here. I’m very excited to see more! I really like your writing style and the complexity of emotions that he’s feeling, it’s honestly been eye opening and thank you for your candour around RSD struggles it gave me things to reflect on personally. The last few chapters truly had my heart strings in a knot was teary eyed for most of them, the end here has been a nice diversion from that. I’m very excited to see how you develop the story following this especially with the stalker and anonymous man being brought into the foreground a little more!