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8/13/25, 9:29 AM
WOW! Hot. No escape now for the slave!
8/13/25, 9:13 AM
Honestly I can think of two options for the lie. It's either the obvious one and that you live happily ever after is a lie. Or the much funnier option. That he never noticed the telescope
Anon
8/13/25, 3:47 AM
To think Hayes had set this up all along. How clever. I find that there's a sharp contrast between Hayes and your previous fellow (the athletic musk fellow). The latter is dominant and controlling but ultimately slowly works his partner in and shows tenderness in the end. Hayes is far darker in some ways- seemingly wanting to covet his friend moreso than love. His dismantling of his friends life is chilling in some ways. That he even turned some of his own superiors and that prisoner even moreso- where did he gain this power? And more importantly...does he truly love his friend...or the feeling of power...or both? In that Hayes is alluring...but just as terrifying. Yet it seems perhaps...the two can fit together. Warped as the path to that has been.

8/13/25, 5:46 AM
@Anon I love how you’ve unpacked Dan and nailed the contrast. There’s nothing supernatural about him, just a mind sharpened by a psychology degree and a lifelong fascination with how easily people break mentally. That curiosity, mixed with his… deranged obsession, drove him to practice and ultimately master the art of hypnosis and brainwashing. And you’re right, his endgame isn’t just about control for its own sake. Dan does truly love Jake in his own warped way, but he loves the power just as much. It’s that mix of devotion and domination that makes him both alluring and terrifying. And now, he's so close to getting exactly what he wants...
8/13/25, 5:39 AM
There is a part of the story that seems to be missing some text. "Jake loved the attention, of course, so the fact that he had men and women staring at him the whole time was a good motivator. As he was flush with the floor ,gings - his asshole clenching and unclenching around the plug. As he stood up, his cheeks shifted from the slight movement, every ripple visible through the leggings. They already looked" I can approve it first you or you can edit it before approval. Up to you.
8/12/25, 9:42 PM
Satisyfying twist!

8/13/25, 5:38 AM
@[benelliot](/user/show/909446) Thank you!
8/12/25, 7:21 PM
That was so freaking hot to read, I can’t wait to read the next chapter. Hopefully See Dan takes Jake properly

8/13/25, 5:38 AM
@[Anon529373](/user/show/541335) The next chapter will be the series finale and we'll see what fate has in store for Jake...
8/12/25, 6:04 PM
I thought only Dan would be the slave, but what a crazy twist! Mine’s even throbbing, too!

8/13/25, 5:33 AM
@[too bey](/user/show/10065269) Glad you enjoyed yourself. :smiling_imp:
8/12/25, 6:02 PM
Oh my gosh!! I had an inkling from various clues and bread crumbs you dropped, but I hadn’t pieced it all together. Bravo. Brilliant. I’m so hooked and can’t wait for what’s next!

8/13/25, 5:31 AM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) Can't thank you enough for your continuous support. Much appreciated!
8/13/25, 5:00 AM
Me encantó, quiero más s por favor 🙏
8/12/25, 1:18 PM
Wow! What a great story! I loved the hypnotic induction and the way Dak is completely oblivious and is able to justify every bit of hinky and questionable behavior. I’m curious about Commander Jackson and if there was anything to his behavior back then - and if he’ll make an appearance here. Well done and can’t wait for more!

8/13/25, 4:31 AM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) ^