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Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 11:12 PM
Hmm, I'm mixed about this story. Pokemon has storylines where hypnosis is used, so it's fertile ground for a hypnosis story. But I'm not really feeling this idea. Sure Gary (aka Shigeru in Japanese) and Ash (aka Takashi) start off as rivals, but they become friends. But I'm not feeling the whole pokeball idea; using a pokemon to control them would seem a better angle to play.
Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 9:58 PM
hot as hell
12/20/20, 9:07 PM
SEQUEL?! please continue!!
Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 8:44 PM
loved it interesting concept
12/20/20, 8:32 PM
The next chapter focuses on Gavin alone with Dr. Cullen rather than having his father around. The final chapter is more about the father, but also the combination of the three of them (which is where the #incest tag really kicks in).
12/20/20, 7:38 PM
Thanks. I'm not in love with how this little trilogy went - it feels disjointed and lacking a clear tension to me. I appreciate the kudos, but I don't think I'd write this again.
K77
12/20/20, 3:48 PM
Great storytelling! Please keep writing more! I can't wait to see how this develops.
12/20/20, 1:00 PM
Ethan Gets Burgled
Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 12:56 PM
I liked this story. Hope you continue it, would love to see what else he makes them do.
12/20/20, 12:06 PM
This is very well constructed and developed, I love how we read both subjects perspectives and how the conditioning works on their psyches. Also the next chapter is Daddy’s chapter? Neat!