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12/17/20, 9:54 AM
That's another one where it worked from Word, but not from a browser. I usually test links on both, but apparently, I'm getting forgetful in my old age. I've updated the link, pending an admin's approval. In case you don't want to wait, [this is the new one](https://m.media-amazon.com/images/M/MV5BMTgwMTE5OTM2OV5BMl5BanBnXkFtZTcwNTM4NjQwNA@@._V1_.jpg).
12/17/20, 9:32 AM
first link to Tobias' pic needs a log in :
12/17/20, 9:19 AM
Awesome! as usual you've outdone yourself Gerbilbee! I really hope you'll have a chance to put out the next chapter soon! 😁
Dec 17, 2020
12/17/20, 8:21 AM
Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading! :)
12/17/20, 8:20 AM
Excellent feedback. I'll be sure to incorporate this feedback for future stories. Thanks for reading! :)
Anonymous
12/17/20, 8:02 AM
i loved this story and hope you continue it. be cool seeing where it goes if you do
12/17/20, 8:02 AM
I think the premise and the imagery is great, but there just isn't enough actual mind control for my taste. We're told that the men have all been turned into "pod zombies," but we don't get a clear sense of what that mental transformation is like. It could have really used a scene where Adam comes face-to-face with one of his zombified teammates.
Dec 17, 2020
12/17/20, 7:30 AM
hot, not sure what to critique but i did enjoy it. =
12/17/20, 6:00 AM
This is pretty hot lol though I hope they think to actually hide their activities
Anonymous
12/17/20, 5:26 AM
Is Charlie becoming black? I can't tell. This story is so hot.