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12/4/20, 6:20 PM
this ending made me very very said for Erics sake
12/4/20, 6:09 PM
Love this; hope we get more someday!
12/4/20, 2:55 PM
ken got his comeuppance finally but the ending was really bittersweet. I find it really cute that Liam and ben can safely regress to toddlers and being themselves back whenever they want. all in all. this was a phenomenal series and read. thank you so much for writing this, can't wait to see what you write in the future. .
12/4/20, 2:17 PM
Great way to end this story!
12/4/20, 2:14 PM
What a great ending! Bittersweet, but mostly what everyone deserves. This is one of the best pieces on here.
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12/4/20, 2:10 PM
Wow! What an awesome ending to this well written series. I liked the explanation of the tantalizing appeal of dumbing down and the karmic justice exacted upon Ken and Chris. Great job!
12/4/20, 1:22 PM
The premise is good and the execution is fun. Plenty of potential for expansion. Consider doing the songs. :-)
12/4/20, 1:08 PM
this is one if my favorite stories of all time here. incredible original concept, well executed and fantastically written. i keeping coming back to it...
12/4/20, 12:36 PM
Great story! The ending was one of the best parts - wish that had been expanded upon a little more! :)
12/4/20, 11:42 AM
please continue this hot story