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Anonymous
12/5/20, 7:06 AM
This story is amazing. I think should reconsider about introducing the coach and the policeman to business , that idea of ​​adding them is very hot, and it would also be unbelievable to add this new subject to the group
12/5/20, 6:26 AM
Hope there is more to this. It was very hotttt
12/5/20, 5:39 AM
I definitely enjoyed this, and it was hot. The one thing I'd suggest for the future is spend a bit more time with the story, describe a bit more and take some time.
12/5/20, 4:45 AM
I really enjoy your nerdification stories. I hope you write more.
12/5/20, 4:40 AM
i picked up later the 111 emergency number so i def knew you were NZ. Great to see awesome writing talent from here. I will find yur tumblrs also. Keep it up . CHCH here btw.
hypnosub
12/5/20, 4:36 AM
this is SUCH a phenomenal way to end the story! i've read your stories on tumblr and this one by far has the most satisfying and well written, it perfectly captures all of the fun times of being little bit also packs quite the emotional punch. and the on/off switch was a nice touch - i'd love to see you explore that concept in other stories in the future!
12/5/20, 4:24 AM
@Dayle I'm in New Zealand and I did wonder if anyone would guess it from the Countdown reference (I believe they're all called Woolworths in Australia). Also it's one of the only countries where bare feet in public are normal and acceptable. If you like my story have a look at my tumblr, which is under my pen name. I have heaps more stories there.
12/5/20, 12:55 AM
Truly amazing story. Loved every word of it. i think we all admit we have thought about what would our lives be like if we just escaped the stresses and worries of adulthood. now Mindwiper are u in Australia or New Zealand? because the Countdown supermarket reference was noticed. Hope to see more of your work in the coming months. Keep it up.
12/5/20, 12:36 AM
great story. thanks for writing this. sign me up for programing as a little with an on-off switch. I too feel sorry for Chris. he seems to be the odd man out. although there are plenty of story lines that could be opened up at an institutional setting.
12/5/20, 12:27 AM
Great first story! And welcome....we need more pups writing stories. That was a good and well written abduction and transformation pup story.