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May 20, 2020
Martin
12/3/20, 9:26 PM
What an amazing jewel this story is!
12/3/20, 8:58 PM
There is clearly enough for a series. Also, it's awesome.
Anonymous
12/3/20, 6:53 PM
Please continue the story. I love it so far. Would gladly have one of these plants for my own.
12/3/20, 6:27 PM
i wonder if this series will be continued. i would love to see further degredation of the dad. it is very very lovely series
Anonymous
12/3/20, 6:07 PM
Wow, I'm just really glad how the support to this series continues to grow, its unbelievable! I just hit 43 likes and I am super, SUPER happy. @anon, lol I guess I am kinda like Jacob! I do see myself a lot in him (I'm a fairly small statured guy who likes to dominate and to bottom for other bigger men as well) haha. [click here](https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/780995246427078706/784118461198368768/image0.jpg)
12/3/20, 3:39 PM
Thanks man! I didn't really wanna do Chapters as my first story but instead just replease it all as one whole thing. Definetly noted though! Glad you enjoyed! :D
12/3/20, 3:28 PM
I love the premise of Willy Wonka but I think I would have enjoyed more detail about the tortures and some more kink. These were more like foreplay. and your idea is so good, I think you could have made each of the "winners" it's own chapter with character background and maybe even combine several of the factory products: Te rubberising compound paired with immobilisation, or cum deprivation and going from monster cock to micro-penis or vice versa... So many possibilities. And the Dom who operates the factory re-shaping Charlie into his boy, then with each chapter, elevates him to his equal and partner. Wonderful and I hope you do expand it
Nov 28, 2020
12/3/20, 3:02 PM
An interesting premise, would like Mark to remember their time together in his dream and wake up to find himself very hard.
12/3/20, 2:55 PM
Excellent story. So hot. I would love to see where you could take this story.
Anonymous
12/3/20, 1:05 PM
Fuuuck as Fred would say...of course I want more, this series is phenomenal. LOL, in a way you really are Jacob and we are Alfredo, begging for more.