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12/4/20, 2:14 PM
What a great ending! Bittersweet, but mostly what everyone deserves. This is one of the best pieces on here.
Anonymous
12/4/20, 2:10 PM
Wow! What an awesome ending to this well written series. I liked the explanation of the tantalizing appeal of dumbing down and the karmic justice exacted upon Ken and Chris. Great job!
12/4/20, 1:22 PM
The premise is good and the execution is fun. Plenty of potential for expansion. Consider doing the songs. :-)
12/4/20, 1:08 PM
this is one if my favorite stories of all time here. incredible original concept, well executed and fantastically written. i keeping coming back to it...
12/4/20, 12:36 PM
Great story! The ending was one of the best parts - wish that had been expanded upon a little more! :)
12/4/20, 11:42 AM
please continue this hot story
Jason
12/4/20, 10:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter!
12/4/20, 9:54 AM
God I love the stuff you and your BF produce, more muscle sluts with eager donuts and so... fuck, I need to draw out some summoning circles.
giveintothemusk
12/4/20, 8:14 AM
Good story . . . But that ending. . . Ruthless! 😅
12/4/20, 7:50 AM
I'll be honest I was rooting for Victor to be the victor this whole time. I felt like he was the only character I could trust and the best one to solve the problem. Also, what was everyone thinking making him leave like that? Victor is the most vicious character with the best trigger finger and the only character we can say beyond doubt was not the impostor. They just gave the most violent candidate to become a ruthless rapist. This feels like the dumbest possible move