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11/30/20, 12:06 PM
I'm really digging this, because it explores the concept of the plants appearing in other countries, which is something fans have discussed previously. I can understand your desire to give us what we want with a minimum of delay, but making Michael resist for a bit longer would build anticipation. It's like the first hill of a roller coaster: no matter how big the hill is, you will eventually go back down, but isn't it more exciting to go down a really big hill than a little one?
11/30/20, 11:57 AM
great story. I love reading about Krispy and Azure
11/30/20, 11:55 AM
Of course I'd be down seeing more hypnotized wrestlers. Maybe even coach,himself! Poor jockboy got his life improved without even knowing who to be grateful for. He's got enough time to make up for it as Jacob's personal toy now
Ben
11/30/20, 11:51 AM
@Hypnothrill to be honest I'd have liked to, only I didn't really see the point in prolonging the inevitable and waiting to get to the good stuff. Especially since the plants always make their hosts want that second hit, so the pollinated are never really in control of their actions when they do. I mean, let's face it, we're all waiting for the moment when Michael gives in, so why not give the people what they want, right? Hahaha, but thank-you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it :)
11/30/20, 11:50 AM
Good fun! Although I think Dad gave in kind of easily, it was a well-written transformation scene! More dog!!!
Astro
11/30/20, 11:27 AM
we are HERE for the Azure fanfic. i read the description and i was like Yo watch this be about azure from the controlee's perspective. even though i dont like a lot of your other work, this here is golden
11/30/20, 10:55 AM
He will do great things with my assistance. I am proud to serve Mered-Nahab.
11/30/20, 10:04 AM
I think this is fantastic. I love the scene where Michael is in the bathroom watching his body start to change. I just would have stretched out his resistance a little bit longer, to make him really struggle over the question of whether to take that second hit of pollen.
11/30/20, 8:48 AM
Larry. He was downstairs for most of the evening. Plenty of time to set things up unnoticed, especially with the commotion upstairs. He showed just in time for the power to fail. He was in the basement when Dimitri got locked in the breaker room and when Asher was converted. He was with the others while Mathilde, Wesley, and Braxton were converted. He was presence during Dimitri's conversion. After that, he wasn't identified by name again. He had prior knowledge of the house, having grown up there. As far as this story's Justice Wargrave goes, why not the son of the judge?
11/30/20, 8:29 AM
Also as a side note, I think CaF is my favorite story of yours to date, even better than WoT in my opinion, and i think ive re-read it at least 10 times since it came out. I think maybe its cause you started with hypnotising the dad first, unlike with Tim or Lucas in WoT. Really looking forward to that chapter 2. Thankfully its not that far off haha.