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11/27/20, 5:46 PM
That was really fun. Loved the music / warfare comparison. Gave a laugh at Flower Oath. But now I'm wondering, since the flowers are repopulating, where are they repopulating from, and are their gardeners on the way.
11/27/20, 5:07 PM
The cock growing was an unforseen but definite plus imo! Hot evolution the guy went through! Interesting concept there with the wishes affecting the past. I could see potential for a series, especially if the genie/game wanders around! Good job!
screamingmoist
11/27/20, 5:07 PM
That's not a bad idea! I never thought about someone weaponizing it, but that would make for an interesting story.
Nov 25, 2020
11/27/20, 5:03 PM
This story was pure bliss! Loved the changes implied where the guy transformed to fit the curse the witch forced upon him! The reality change revolving around it was super hot too! That's perhaps something I should try myself sometime! And the physical/mental changes brought upon with the transformation were kinks that I absolutely adore! Great story!
11/27/20, 4:40 PM
very hot loving this world a lot
11/27/20, 4:16 PM
Loved your discussion of the garden and the aggressive nature of plants. I appreciate the sense of humor you display throughout your writing. Wonderful work on this exciting second book of your series. I hope that you will be inspired at some point to continue the saga and write book 3.
11/27/20, 3:45 PM
I think they'll call him "Gil" (btw -- my Baby Name book has "Gilen" (hard "G" -- gill-uhn, not like "Gillian" with a soft "G") meaning "Vow" or "Oath", but I like yours better.
11/27/20, 3:34 PM
Bravo! HAIL ABSMAN! Gilen Lafleur. The last name was obvious- the flower- but I had to dig for Gilen. Eventually, I tracked down that it is a Basque variant of Ghislain, which means betrothed or hostage So Rugby Boy is literally a flower hostage. You sly fox, you.
11/27/20, 3:07 PM
Check out the Author's Notes and discussion on the [FORUM](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/pollination-the-discussion/1810/678)
11/27/20, 2:36 PM
incredible story with great details. i can almost feel the pumpkin sliding over my head! I like the picture at the beginning to set the stage. Can't wait to read the next chapter!