Recent Comments

11/25/20, 8:46 AM
A red herring swallowed one, then there were three...I must say, if Victor doesn't end up receiving some horrific punishment at the end of the story, I'll be an unhappy camper. :p Thank you for the warning about the violence--seeing Victor act in such a homophobic way hit very close to home (because, although this is a grim fantasy, there are too many people in the real world who think that way). I also applaud you for calling Victor out as deluded! On a lighter note, Matt's line--"you definitely guessed wrong"--suggests that perhaps Jen is the impostor; maybe they had some "girl talk." Next up we go to the zoo to meet a bear...
RicanCub
11/25/20, 7:49 AM
It is a beautiful and haunting horror story where society goes tragically wrong but oh so hot. Great!
Anonymous
11/25/20, 2:19 AM
I love a good story about a muscular man who gets a pussy
11/25/20, 12:23 AM
Thanks for the great comments, everyone! I didn't expect to receive such a great reception in this site. I just want to let everyone know that I will be posting the next chapter sometime tonight. I appreciate everyone's support. @ Hyptrance, I'm so glad that you approve of my story, actually. I'm a huge fan of your writing and I actually took a lot of inspiration from your stories to write this installment, so it means a lot that I got your approval!
Lusty Stallion
11/24/20, 11:42 PM
I enjoyed it. Couldnt work out why his cock kept growing based on those wosjes, but I'm not complaining. A great ride thanks man
11/24/20, 10:24 PM
I'm wondering about Jen, though. In the initial revelations, the voice called Mathilde "the biggest bitch", which seems like a feminine turn of phrase.
Anonymous
11/24/20, 10:03 PM
great story excellent work!!
naked poof
11/24/20, 9:36 PM
what a wonderful story, i really likes it so much
Nov 24, 2020
11/24/20, 9:16 PM
cool, thanks, now lets see hoe the town changes/was changed
Nov 24, 2020
11/24/20, 8:41 PM
Darkblade2814 -- I'd like for this to be a series, to be honest. I have some ideas and some plans for it.