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silverbuho
11/24/20, 3:55 AM
One of the best stories I've read in a while! Keep it up 👍👍
11/24/20, 3:53 AM
Great work. Particularly enjoyed the main character was feeling shy for a while before accepting his new gay feelings. And the best friend was quite enjoyable hot, too
Anonymous
11/24/20, 3:33 AM
The exposition is sort of exhausting
giveintothemusk
11/24/20, 3:28 AM
This has been fantastic!
11/24/20, 3:13 AM
dont return them how they were before or better yet, write how you were planning to. I find it strange people thinking this is somehow scary being this is fiction Doing a great job
11/24/20, 1:46 AM
One got in Chancery, then there were four...another fantastic chapter! The muscle growth and transformation in this one was particularly hot. We're left with Jen, Sebastian, Victor, and Theo...Victor's nasty behavior (boy, I dislike "alpha" nonsense) seems to exonerate him. My money for the impostor, if there is one, is still Theo, or the "average" Sebastian. Although I may have to go back and check to see if anyone else made contact with the outside world...if they did and DIDN'T transform, that must make them the guilty party! Time for a reread before we go out to sea to hunt for red herrings...
11/24/20, 1:26 AM
just read thru all this in one sitting keep up the goid work.
11/24/20, 1:25 AM
A good premise but a bit short, i would have like it fleshed out some more. I too was hoping the cop would take him home to play with. I also wonder if the guy has any family and what they would say and do with their family member made into a himbot for stealing!
11/23/20, 11:35 PM
Too long for my taste but otherwise, I loved it!
11/23/20, 10:45 PM
@nerdysuitedbaby - Heh. The thing is Billy never really had a choice. ;) And what you said of Jared is all true as well (except for being asked/choice to conform, but he was always being forced to become a prep anyway). Thanks for reading and that you love my stuff.