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9/1/23, 3:42 PM
I'm backing away from my "long game" theory in the previous chapter because it stretches credulity that Eddie would go so far as to arrange for himself to be covertly monitored. Which brings us back to the version where Matt wins by virtue of becoming the Greatest Evil.

9/1/23, 4:30 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) I’m wondering if there is no winner and actually Matt & Eddie end up joining forces . Eddie did say to Matt they are like each other

9/1/23, 4:33 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) It would certainly be a new creative direction for the author : his previous stories were consistently singularly decisive

9/1/23, 7:13 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Must admit, I still want Eddie to win , hoping he wanted Matt all along 😳

8/16/25, 5:58 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Ah! but what if Eddie has secretly installed security cameras around the apartment and already knows about Matt's growing capabilities?! If that is the case, Eddie will likely lose interest in toying with Matt and may wish instead to enslave him fully to the void. ...only my reading the next chapter will reveal the answer (or at least the next piece of a puzzle and my deepening quandary about this whole mess). [To the author my apologies for referring to your story as "this whole mess". I truly meant that in the nicest way, reflecting only on my admiration to you for your wonderful imagination, the incredible way you weave your words into a amazingly tangled (but entirely enjoyable) web.]
8/16/25, 5:39 AM
This situation is getting so convoluted. At this point i don't know who to hope will win out. I had been feeling very positive about Matt, but then his perspective took a turn for the worse with Mr. Fadden. I certainly don't want Ryan, Richard, Nathan, Moore, or Fadden to have their lives ripped away from them. Total power exchange without full knowledge and consent and in the end complete destruction for the slaves isn't right or fair; in fact it's downright evil. But then this is fantasy, and in some ways Eddie is a sympathetic character. He's had a hard life. He's intelligent, outwardly friendly, understanding, and one might think even generous by granting his slaves a stress-free existence and blissful almost continuous sexual gratification. I'm just so dazed and confused that I'm ready to ask Eddie for his help. I should probably read the next chapter before making any final decisions.
8/16/25, 3:17 AM
This story is delicious, devious erotic hypnosis at its most subliminal. Jon recognized the danger but being bound, he was forced but not forced him to give in and embrace the danger! I'm going to try another one of your stories. fine?
EJG
8/15/25, 1:27 PM
Love it. Privately fantasising Jason has a bunch of str8 mates he can share his little slut with?

8/16/25, 12:57 AM
@[EJG](/user/show/1050471) Not currently the plan, but anything’s possible. For sure there are some group scenes ahead.
8/15/25, 8:17 PM
Is this the beginning of a weekly Friday story update?! I sure hope so!! As always, great story Naedre!

8/16/25, 12:55 AM
@[Island Jock-1](/user/show/925246) That’s the goal if I can keep up with timing. I’ve got 2 more chapters written and scheduled to post and 1 more 80% written or so, so likely good for at least 3 weeks. Unfortunately I did miss the internal timing cutoff for next Friday, so the next chapter is coming Saturday. It features Toby’s hunky older brother.
8/16/25, 12:06 AM
I'm hooked, bro. I know I'll be checking back for more updates.
8/15/25, 10:36 PM
Mindblowing hot, as always Definitely wouldn’t mind knowing more of what was going on in the dark too 😈
BigBurlyBear-1
8/15/25, 4:51 PM
I loved this story. From the premise to the writing style, you’ve got it down. Can’t wait to see some more bearification.

8/15/25, 6:17 PM
@[BigBurlyBear-1](/user/show/10007129) Hey bro, thanks so much, very eager to get even deeper into the bearification. :bear: Anything you're especially eager to see?

BigBurlyBear-1
8/15/25, 10:15 PM
@[Wrangler](/user/show/605341) I’m a huge fan of first person transformations. Growing in size, muscles, body hair, beards - a good muscle gut doesn’t hurt. Would love to see more of Coach, too. I’m also a fan of the ladies… looking forward to some bulls breeding for their community.
8/15/25, 9:54 PM
Really love the story and the description of the kissing. Hot.
8/15/25, 9:11 PM
Short but hot!