Recent Comments

11/11/20, 5:51 PM
Great conclusion! Most of all I'm happy that Sam got taken down a peg or six with the final enchantment. I don't like "alpha bros" in real life, so reading about them isn't fun, either--but the newest version of Sam is much more manageable. Fantastic ending! :)
11/11/20, 5:38 PM
To answer everyone's questions, yes it was a community series, but to publish in the series, it requires the author to approve of the chapter. HypnoFanatic unfortunately didn't disable this setting before they went inactive, so a new series was created as a continuation.
BPtime
11/11/20, 4:54 PM
A hot cautionary tale. The kind that teases you into taking risks.
11/11/20, 4:52 PM
that ending was super hot. muscle bull bottoms are the best and the clever twist of getting the guy to make himself dumbed down was perfect.
Anonymous
11/11/20, 3:59 PM
just great !! wonderful trilogy...thank you !!
11/11/20, 3:26 PM
All three, I was sorry to see the shop owner fall in such disgrace, though. It's such an innocent story, really. I loved tat the shop keep finally found someone to complete him , then lost it all. I do hope you're more generous with the next victim. Regardless; I gave you all 5's in rating! Excellent writing!!
HypnoInexperienced4master
11/11/20, 3:11 PM
Hot scene with John and Luke and his laying claim of him by squirting in his hole. Got me playing with my cock.
11/11/20, 2:58 PM
Amazing!!!! i love this series.can continue! 💙💙💙 can't wait for more chapters. Also, as the comment above says the original series is a community series, i think it will be better if this chapter (and future chapters) be there to make it easy to follow.
11/11/20, 2:51 PM
Wow. Awesome ending. Turned out perfect. Perfectly hot, with a perfect ending. I wasn’t shocked by it but wasn’t expecting Sam to be the POV character this chapter (even tho of course he was). I found myself wondering if it being him would complicate things. It didn’t at all. I loved that he figured out what was going on and then tried to manipulate Ethan, eventually getting cursed again. Great ending. I loved all 3 chapters.
11/11/20, 2:39 PM
I really like this continuation, but wasn't the original story a community story to begin with? Anyway, can't wait to see what's next for Edward, Luke and Brendan