Recent Comments

11/12/20, 12:12 PM
This. Is. GREAT!!!
Ng5hvlo4
11/12/20, 12:11 PM
it is a good start, but it was difficult to follow the dialogue (using " " and new paragraphs for that would help), and while the introduction and MC scenes were well thought out, it felt rushed to get to the point where the recruit became a Squad Leader and went out to the streets with the others (who were not mentioned at all before then, making it feel out of place). The rubber aspect was a nice touch, but (at least for me) the smoking aspect took away from the hot factor; I'm sure others will disagree with me on that point.
Anonymous
11/12/20, 9:24 AM
It's a good start. Looking forward to what comes next.
11/12/20, 8:22 AM
Always good to have MAL back.
11/12/20, 8:18 AM
Please continue this!
Martin
11/12/20, 7:29 AM
> Maybe you could check with Martin if he can transfer the chapters in the old series to this one… The "owner" of the old series is still HypnoFanatic and I just don't want to take their ownership away. I'm fine with creating a new series as a continuation, and I agree, it would be perfect to add a link to the original series. I took the liberty of adding that link to your story.
11/12/20, 6:18 AM
Hi! This is one of the best series here, thank you for providing such a great dumb hypnotist character! As for the content, I prefer when Ethan is a bottom, the laundromat was waaaay hotter to me than this chapter. So I vote for the Uber part, with the suggestion than some drug events occur in the club (I picture Ethan very well getting high with xtc he'd "accidently" asked for and ending up in another gangbang before taking his Uber). But whatever you'll write I can't wait to read it!
11/12/20, 5:54 AM
:P this story is a cluster of hot and funny. I vote for burglers!
11/12/20, 4:25 AM
you are right on that, I forgot about it. Maybe you could check with Martin if he can transfer the chapters in the old series to this one... or maybe put a link inside the story (on the note before the story) to the old series. Anyway, is great you decide to continue this ^ ^ hope read more from you soon!!
11/12/20, 3:12 AM
Alas, sadly, this particular story is focused on Tyler's POV.