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Nov 27, 2025
11/28/25, 1:11 PM
Sweet, holesome, tantalizing. I'm in lust with this story at the first taste and hungry for more!
Nov 27, 2025
11/28/25, 8:47 AM
Great start.
Anonymous
11/28/25, 8:26 AM
Hope this gets more ! I’m curious if his business partner would be gay and see him as a sex dog , or straight and just start petting him when brought in completely obviously he is his former partner as the dog begs for help
Anonymous
11/28/25, 7:18 AM
Ok, I'm too curious after rereading the chapters and I want to think of some ideas for what exactly Master's plan is: 1. Master wants to use Jamie's power as fuel for latex creation 2. Seems fitting to me that a light and shadow based combo could work well 3. Maybe it could work recursively for future hero drones? It's probably a lot bigger than any of these, but I am *very* curious
Nov 27, 2025
11/28/25, 6:16 AM
Ooooh, love it. The element of magic and mystery at the end is really exciting--love the brief peek we get of Fred being brainwashed into a kitchen king--and you have a real knack for capturing characterization. Can't wait to see the rest of the feast. :D
Nov 27, 2025
11/28/25, 5:06 AM
Great start!
11/28/25, 12:34 AM
The longer this story goes on, the more my heart breaks for Jamie. He's been betrayed by, abandoned by or had taken away from him everyone he's ever cared for or allowed close to him. It's no wonder Jamie's walls are so impenetrable, he's been hurt so many times he won't allow himself to be vulnerable ever again. I can't help but think that maybe if Master told Jamie the full truth of his plan, his conversion would have gone much more easily.

11/28/25, 2:58 AM
@[phillipsm](/user/show/919402) Possibly, if the plan is good enough. But Jamie would probably still have trouble trusting Master, and he would still have had a very hard time giving himself into Master's control. He knows very well that once he does that, he won't really have any more choices.
11/27/25, 6:32 PM
Incredible story.

11/28/25, 2:56 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks again!
11/22/25, 10:44 AM
Need more of this!

11/28/25, 2:53 AM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) I got more for you :)
11/21/25, 2:48 PM
Amazing and well written. Thanks for the work!

11/28/25, 2:53 AM
@[BrGuy](/user/show/10033894) Thank you too for reading it. Glad you enjoyed and I hope I can keep you coming back for more.