Recent Comments

10/29/20, 4:20 AM
Wow dude, I love the outline you have here for the future of the story. And yeah, I agree with you that Jese should still be bratty and a little resistant to the full slutty mode on Star World. This will give us a nice build up in the story and make everything sweeter. I wanted to use this opportunity to actually refer you to my stories, if possible. One of them is called World of Erotus and is actually a D&D-esque erotic story set in a fantasy world, so I think you might like that! I have also published the Slutty Naughty Jock series and just posted yesterday a new story called Dumb Jock Roommate. I'm actually thinking of posting them here on the site as well, I think maybe they will be a good fit. Anyway, give them a read if you want, I hope you like them, and I would love to hear your thoughts! https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/world-of-erotus/ https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/college/dumb-jock-roommate https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/incest/slutty-naughty-jock/
10/29/20, 2:32 AM
this is great love the story so much
10/29/20, 1:47 AM
I really, really hope this story isn't dead. This is one of the best slow burn transformation and role-reversal stories on here.
Anonymous
10/29/20, 12:40 AM
i live to servr the virus
10/28/20, 11:07 PM
Woof! What a creative story! I really enjoyed having cum as the central role.
Zac
10/28/20, 10:40 PM
Fucking HOT! Looking forward to Chapter 2.
10/28/20, 10:14 PM
@Rspark: why do you say that? Just cuz he's a well-behaved mama's boy?
Evan
10/28/20, 10:09 PM
What a story. The ending in particular, forced to use their cum on each other. Exquisite! Well done.
Shadow
10/28/20, 10:01 PM
oh my God this was hot. i can't wait for the next
10/28/20, 9:03 PM
I would love it if the younger bro. would continue to give his older bro. more attitude & memory adjustments, making him believe that he has always actually been the younger -little brother. His memories should be altered so that he believes that he was the one bullied in school [and deserved to be],& that he always looked-up to his 'older' & much more manly brother. However he should believe he deserved this treatment by his manly brother & his friends because he's always been such a weak little immature guy..Perhaps he should start behaving in a much more 'child-like' manner, even wetting his pants when he gets excited [& believing that he's always had to wear diapers under his pants. In addition to sucking his thumb]...Also when the two brothers go out, the NOW younger one should feel that all other guys are SUPERIOR to him, like his NOW OLDER brother..& treat them as such.. [also, he would no longer think of his girlfriend, or any women in a sexual manner, but more like mother's or nursemaids & babysitters.... When he thinks of his own dick, it is no longer his formally 8incher, but now IN HIS OWN MIND He sees a tiny, little-boy nub !!!.....Then perhaps [in a chapter #3], in addition to the now younger bro becoming totally gay, His formally younger brother would finally use his machine ON HIMSELF [!!!], and once and for all, turning himself into the manly older brother that he would like to be : HAPPY ENDING !!!