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10/20/20, 12:06 PM
All that fun and no guilt I'm in , lol
10/20/20, 11:44 AM
Ooo new reading materials! Mimbo drops I've read before and fell in love with it, so it'll be good to have more stories to add to my list! Speaking of, yours was really well written, and it was wonderful to see the gradual transformation of them both. Kudos to you! =]
10/20/20, 7:57 AM
This story has so many elements that I really love, including underwear fetish and serial recruitment. But I feel like it's missing one very important ingredient that would make it sizzling hot: conflict, No one's offering any resistance to the Revive shorts, no one seems reluctant to try them on, and no one seems remotely distressed that they've suddenly turned gay. Heck, there's not even any conflict between the various Revive-controlled teams in the tournament, as the protagonists get picked in advance to win. If you write a third chapter to this--and I hope you do--I'd love to see you introduce a character, maybe a coach or father, who gets suspicious of Revive and actually puts up a fight.
10/20/20, 7:57 AM
More please. Go further, either feminize him or go for age regression
10/20/20, 7:26 AM
I personally don't feel like detailed physical descriptions of the characters are so essential. It will sometimes stop a story's momentum in its tracks if you provide elaborate descriptions for four characters at once. But I would agree that you need to do a little more to distinguish these guys from each other, giving them more distinct personalities and voices. I thought the overall changes were hot, but I really couldn't keep the main characters straight.
10/20/20, 6:33 AM
great new chapter. glad to hear more will be coming soon. I like what you did to Bob. he needs to be hungry for his son's cock so that they can all serve Dan equally. I'm guessing Michael will find out the fag is he himself
10/20/20, 6:32 AM
This is my favorite one tbh. Always have a soft spot for incubi though.
10/20/20, 6:29 AM
just like what the others have said, i am looking forward to more of this. just love trucker stories
10/20/20, 5:57 AM
Wow. You’re such a clever, smart writer, with your stories always managing to be so hot while also being clever and smart. I’m flattered you slipped Extreme Changeover in here. I think that was my first story, and definitely not my best. Definitely fits with the theme of your story here tho! I loved the slow changes. They were very nicely drawn out. And the spin of the metaphor. Again, very clever and smart.
Sexcrab
10/20/20, 5:33 AM
I think the only shortcoming in this story is the lack of detail and depth. There is not even a physical description of the boys at any point in this story. Even if this story explores other victims in the next part, there should be a complete, albeit basic, description of each young woman.