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10/20/20, 3:52 PM
@New Guy In Town - Thanks! The use of the word 'metaphor' in this story was a bit of a stab at the faux intellectualism that can surround literary criticism, and yeah, it was intentionally misused. It sounds like a fun challenge to try and write a dumbing down story where the subject keeps autonomy and control... I'll put that in the idea folder. As for your idea folder, your meta story sounds fun. I hope you write it! @MonsterMash62 - Extreme Changeover where I learned what I call 'transformation in stages'. It's not just one moment, but a whole set of steps that lets us explore how the character feels as each aspect of themselves is changed. It's had a tremendous impact on my writing, and that's why I picked it to include. Plus it's damn hot. I sort of pair it with this picture in my head: http://musclejocks.blogspot.com/2009/07/muscle-jocks-of-day.html?m=1 @SubMuscleGuy - Thanks! As soon as I thought "What if there was a class that dissected dumbing down and it brought you along for the ride" I couldn't help but write it. There are so many great stories under the 'dumber' tag that it was hard to pick just a few. @MeddlerIncs - Thanks! I feel like I'm standing on the shoulders of giants with this one. @JockPupTraxxx - Aw, thanks man. I love when people like my work enough to comment on it. I'm basically a slut for praise, without the comments I doubt I'd write.
10/20/20, 2:49 PM
another great story as usual
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10/20/20, 2:47 PM
Amazing start to the story! Looking forward to more
10/20/20, 2:47 PM
I really liked the pace of the story. I got to know the characters well enough. Please continue
10/20/20, 2:45 PM
Fantastic story, DW. And the reference material is the stuff of legend as well. Really well written.
10/20/20, 2:20 PM
I’d like to read more. This was a hot beginning!
10/20/20, 2:09 PM
i would love to see a role reversal of the nerd being the bigger jock/top/dom country trucker in their relationship post hypnosis and tf.
10/20/20, 12:45 PM
need more of Bob being the bottom bitch of the family. He is the alpha of the house before I would love him to be the lowest in the family. Thank you for being an awesome writer!
10/20/20, 12:06 PM
All that fun and no guilt I'm in , lol
10/20/20, 11:44 AM
Ooo new reading materials! Mimbo drops I've read before and fell in love with it, so it'll be good to have more stories to add to my list! Speaking of, yours was really well written, and it was wonderful to see the gradual transformation of them both. Kudos to you! =]