Recent Comments

10/19/20, 12:14 PM
> i cant wait to see where this goes next! > Thank you -- I'm super-glad you're enjoying it! I know what's going on in Book Two isn't everybody's cup of tea, but it really is my intent to create the best plant-based-alien-assimilation-muscle-growth-mind-control story out there. I confess, I've been enjoying writing Book Two WAY more than I thought I would -- perhaps that's why I'd put it off for 15 years -- and I'm curious how you're all gonna feel at the end...? For the record, I initially plotted ten chapters, which would take us to chap 19, but I slowed a sub-plot down (on purpose) and it looks like that's gonna force another chapter out, giving us chap 20 for the end of Book Two. (That means five chapters left from this point.) And believe me when I say it's a twisty-turny journey from here.
10/19/20, 12:05 PM
> If what happened to Murdock after meeting the Great One is anything to go by... > Yeah... it doesn't look good for our cast. Still, there is a critical difference between Old Man Bowden's transformation into the Great One and the Deputy's and that may have an effect on the rest of the supporting characters. (We'll talk more about this in a few chapters.) Still, I think your analysis is spot on.
10/19/20, 11:25 AM
Thank you Derek Williams. This was such a hot story. Extremely relevant with the discussion going on in the forum at the moment. It has been so long since I read a truly great story on this site. Nothing has really appealed to me in a long time, so thank you very much for this.
10/19/20, 11:18 AM
Sinners and Saints episode 2. That brings me back. The other guy being changed into "Tank" was so damn hot. lol. Derek, you did it again. Loved this.
10/19/20, 9:57 AM
I liked this, but the ending felt a little rushed. I wasn't quite sure what the Revive company's agenda was or why the boys were being turned gay. Perhaps a sequel would be in order!
10/19/20, 9:57 AM
Smells and filth - what more could you want in a story?
10/19/20, 9:50 AM
I'd love to meet a 'Jeremy' and have him control me mmm!
Ozark
10/19/20, 8:37 AM
i cant wait to see where this goes next!
10/19/20, 6:56 AM
Creative, sexy, and even nostalgic with all of the story references! "Sinners and Saints" was one of the first in the genre that hooked me, haha. You're definitely worthy of being added to the curriculum :)