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10/18/20, 11:17 PM
this could have possibly fit to the halloween challenge with the demon's presence, but no complaints here! I ADORE your work, and the only feedback is to somewhat echo Transformheaven and lament we didn't get a a slightly more drawn out subverting with most of our poor super friends. I DID appreciate that from the start Justice Boy was locked in with the eye contact, and totally unsuspecting, but when it came to actively breaking his will, I feel like the editing floor robbed us of some good bits. A more thorough recollection by Mr. Humble about how he got started in the chicken business, his first encounters with Crimson Fist and Wiz Kid and how he came about to the conclusion to make their jizz into his secret sauce by experimenting with the regular workers, and such? Heck, both parties acknowledged that this was going to be a villainous monologue! Humble could have gone to town. In general, I am just happy we got more of your work, but still want more of your work. ha!
10/18/20, 10:33 PM
I bet the the story will end with the dragon taking over the kingdom
10/18/20, 9:58 PM
That was a very inspired story. I liked how much it put me in the time-period while still maintaining an MC theme.
10/18/20, 9:23 PM
I think the beam will be repropused into a lust inducing beam
10/18/20, 9:11 PM
YES! suited mindfucked chicken top ticks all my boxes
10/18/20, 9:04 PM
Love this so much.
10/18/20, 8:49 PM
Looking forward to seeing other jocks get it. Hehe
Oct 11, 2020
10/18/20, 6:44 PM
no lie this is the best one I've ever read on here
10/18/20, 6:31 PM
fuckn aaaausome!
Leo
10/18/20, 5:10 PM
Ew please DO NOT make him feminine ^^ I agree with @BobAlen make him go to the gym more and grow his muscles. I love where this story is going, young twink has a hunky, older, and masculine submissive daddy under his control. I’m a big fan of daddy slaves <3 I think Bruce should start thinking more like a slave and referring to Jeremy as his master. His only purpose in life is to serve him this includes cooking for him, washing his dishes, clothes, cleaning, and most importantly pleasing his master sexually. From now on, the only thing that daddy slave will wear when he’s alone with his master is a jockstrap and a pair of flip flops. I think Daddy slave should only be allowed to walk on all fours like a dog and his master has him leashed up. I would also like to see daddy slave becoming an obedient foot slave and worship his masters feet. It would also be fun to see them go out in public as a couple just so Jeremy can see how much control he has over his new sexy daddy slave. I’m excited for the next chapter! :)