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9/30/20, 4:38 PM
- Anon - I’m more curious about the other son. I honestly would hope to see some kind of twist with him. Maybe he’s like Bob is now, pretending to be an Alpha only around others, but is already a Beta deep down? Maybe he’s gay or bi? Something that makes him stand distinctly apart from the other two. - Can I second this. Like seriously, I would love stuff like this. Him already being a beta would be cool. Him being gay or bi would be awesome. Him actually pretending to be this macho straight alpha would be even better. Maybe he sees what Dan has done to his father and brother and finds it sexy - like fuck yeah, take that! We already have the homophobes and so there being one who is not kind of sounds hot.
9/30/20, 4:32 PM
COME-ON-BRO !!...HAVEN'T WE WAITED LONG ENOUGH FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER ??? I'v searched every day for the next part of your story [& I'm not even usually into 'weight gain stories'....but I'v found yours especially erotic !!!
9/30/20, 4:26 PM
I would love to see Dan make Michael into a complete stereotype of a 100% complete FAGGOT !!! Give Michael a 'limp wrist', a lisp, a 'nelly walk' : the whole works !!! TURN MICHAEL INTO A TOTAL 'OUEER-FAGGOT-BITCH',...it will serve him right !!!
9/30/20, 4:03 PM
Thanks for your comments again! @Udems. I'm not very familiar with the term Omega in this context, so I would love to read more about it :) @Anon. Dell's story arc is still a little far, but I agree, I can play a little more with his background ;) @Sexcrab. First of all, amazing name, it cracks me a little! I think it's funny... unless it's your real name. Thanks for your comment. I can relate to being lacking in motivation by not being an English native speaker, but I guess by the comments that I’m doing a decent job so far (or at least mediocre, lol) so I will keep writing. And last, I love your suggestions, I’m still trying to fully figure out Michael’s story arc. :)
9/30/20, 3:14 PM
So excited to read this! Hope you're working on chapter two! Grats and thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
9/30/20, 3:07 PM
Excellent
9/30/20, 2:53 PM
A very well written and hot story. I liked the story's scientific approach to the world change.
Anonymous
9/30/20, 2:30 PM
Parts of the buildup were very hot and the story was competently written, but the ending definitely left a bad taste in my mouth.
9/30/20, 1:16 PM
This might be my favorite Pandemic story yet. I loved the suspense and the narrator's slowly changing perceptions.
9/30/20, 12:21 PM
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