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Anonymous
9/5/20, 10:55 AM
terrific
9/5/20, 9:31 AM
I like the innovative method this story used. Any time you can introduce a method that hasn't been used in the thousands of stories on this site and have it be effective is an accomplishment in itself. And to carry that through to his thinking through the colors I felt was very well executed. I thought the story dragged a little toward the end, but not by much and it looks like theres a lot of room for this story to grow and continue.
9/5/20, 9:16 AM
Got MIlk? It would be great to get some. This is a great story. I am looking forward to reading the other chapters.
9/5/20, 8:24 AM
It's interesting how much Cody knows about domination and submission - at that age, he already could tell Alex was close to cracking?
9/5/20, 6:29 AM
Awesome, an unexpected new story from one of my favorite authors! Love the premise, love the TF, and looking forward to more!
9/5/20, 5:21 AM
I like this new challenge of claiming Alex's ass. I wonder how long he'll take to break
Mark
9/5/20, 5:06 AM
Great chapter! Very excited to see what happens with Nick!
9/5/20, 5:00 AM
Desperately edging waiting for more.
boi98229
9/5/20, 4:11 AM
Hey! Thanks! Cute story in a hot kind of way. i have always questioned whether it made sense to want to dumb down a slave, since it just limited the range of things the slave is able to do for its Master. Reading your story, even though intended only as a fantasy, i now can more easily accept how that could work well and happily for both Master and slave. What you have created with magic, i fantasize about creating with various forms of mind control. Part of that common fantasy i think is the submissive's ability to focus his life happily on serving a someone he loves, respects, and/or in some other way connects with in a D/s relationship.
9/5/20, 3:48 AM
Very nice work, very creative! Totally into it.