Recent Comments

9/2/20, 4:58 PM
OMG! I'm dying to know what happens next!
Jockmorphr
9/2/20, 3:00 PM
This story was a really fun, sexy romp and I loved it. Thanks for sharing it with us. I thought the nature of the curse was original and I really enjoyed the way Trent's intelligence came and went. The descriptions of that were great. It's also been far too long since I read a magical mental tf story. so it was very welcome. And I loved Barry. I always enjoy stories where the loyal friend gets caught up in the action of the story. Also, I have a soft spot for big, muscular college jocks. I especially loved when Zonnor got Barry high on oxytocin. I'd been hoping somehow Barry would get affected by Trent's curse, or get caught in the crossfires of a spell, and "dopey Barry" was everything I'd hoped for.
Anonymous
9/2/20, 2:59 PM
what a wonderful read!!! thank you
9/2/20, 2:13 PM
really hot
9/2/20, 1:36 PM
You had me hard & leaking the whole time. Great storyline but I wanted the action to last longer. Also, need to find out what happened with the other guys...more chapters?
Deltayankee
9/2/20, 1:11 PM
If you liked this story, give Cris Kane's *Mariposa* stories a look-see.
9/2/20, 10:49 AM
This is BEAUTIFUL. My heart aches for Tim. What will happen?
9/2/20, 9:54 AM
Great start! Cant wait to read the next part. Thanks!
Oct 13, 2005
Deltayankee
9/2/20, 9:37 AM
Umm ... could use some editing.
Anonymous
9/2/20, 7:54 AM
I liked this story a lot. The way you conveyed the absolute power fantasy is so hot.