Recent Comments

9/2/20, 1:36 PM
You had me hard & leaking the whole time. Great storyline but I wanted the action to last longer. Also, need to find out what happened with the other guys...more chapters?
Deltayankee
9/2/20, 1:11 PM
If you liked this story, give Cris Kane's *Mariposa* stories a look-see.
9/2/20, 10:49 AM
This is BEAUTIFUL. My heart aches for Tim. What will happen?
9/2/20, 9:54 AM
Great start! Cant wait to read the next part. Thanks!
Oct 13, 2005
Deltayankee
9/2/20, 9:37 AM
Umm ... could use some editing.
Anonymous
9/2/20, 7:54 AM
I liked this story a lot. The way you conveyed the absolute power fantasy is so hot.
9/2/20, 5:00 AM
Thanks so much for the support, bmax! I know I'm a bit of a slacker in my writing...lol...I'll try to keep that up better in the future. ;-) I do have a number of ideas on mind, but sometimes it takes that spark to jumpstart the brain cells and get things going.
Anonymous
9/2/20, 3:51 AM
I loved this. Please make more
Sexcrab
9/2/20, 3:47 AM
Wow, it seems you read my text. All my compliments, reflections and criticisms are referenced in this chapter. And with high-quality Josmith narrative that we love, know and need. A organic story, with strong interactions and different voices, highly sexual, perverted at the right point and of course, full of hot and servile daddies, ready to please their owner. I don't disagree with comments above saying the final plot and the protagonist's reaction sounded Stacy's Dad a bit but... I loved. So much. All the characters voices are great for me, but my favorite was certainly Steve. A great deal of the relationship between Steve and Jake has been made. And with it, a big repair too, on both sides. I loved the way you handled that detail that used to bother me. You are truly a great writer. Please, extend this story for 13 chapters, at least. PS: In my other text, I mentioned about consequences and problems who Jake could suffer, but I didn't expect it to happen anytime soon. Obviously, in my theory, it is a false alarm. Just a bad coincidence that scared the protagonist profusely. But the unwanted attention is so "suddenly" that I think the protagonist's fear, which was only at the beginning of his sexual release and used to do everything in conformity before the space rock event, is perfectly natural.
Mark
9/2/20, 2:53 AM
Love this series!